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Idczhen i understand that and have given great thought to it. The mc will end up as a captive anyway. i was just asking if adding the second part which will then connect with the first part is necessary or should i just ditch it and start from when he is already a captive.

BerriApplepi I think you have to message one of the moderators in the discoed for the authors. That’s the only method I know of. It’s best to confirm who with the people in discord

Muigetsu Wow. Great review of the chapter above. I really like how you have detailed everything you thought needed work and helped improve the authors work. I felt like I was the author in this case and wanted to fix the errors myself.

To think you have not taken any writing classes or received any professional help amazes me. You were far better than my English teacher who gave me a few words of constructive criticism and left it at that. Even though this isn’t my work I needed those words as I intend to post a novel on this site soon. Just need more inspiration and all. I wondered what novel you wrote and hope it is very good. I will be checking it out for inspiration! Good or bad I’ assume the grammar will be good in the least since you re read your chapters a lot and then watch tv then re read. That tactic I shall borrow from you friend. Anyways thanks for the detailed report even though this isn’t my work. I felt that I have benefited a lot which warranted me thanking you.

Lord_of_Potatoes I think he meant the translation novels not original webnovels. After all there isn’t any original Webnovel with thousands of chapters.

DeadlyRaven You don’t learn English after one night. It is a process that may take many years for some. Or even weeks for others. So don’t give up and you are on the right track in learning the language

DeadlyRaven You don’t learn English after one night. It is a process that may take many years for some. Or even weeks for others. So don’t give up and you are on the right track in learning the language

medo I mean it’s not easy to stare at a computer and decipher one language to the other and then re read it to make sure it makes sense. I understand it is frustrating and all but trust me translating long work constantly is very tiring and time consuming. It is not as easy as changing one word to the other. Also Chinese sentences and English sentences are not structured in the Same manner. so re reading the sentence and making sure it makes sense is a must. In some cases translating can be harder than writing the actual story. Of course that is if you don’t take into consideration the planning of writing the novel and all.

The author getting sick for a month may be abit too far fetch. However they do deserve a break here and then, not sure it should be for a month though. A week at most because I believe they should pace themselves. But I get it sometimes the demand becomes too much and they get ahead of themselves. After all those sleepless nights may not affect your health when it happens once in a while but if it becomes constant you can forget about good health for sometime. Hope my two cents helps!

Blackvision That’s something that ticks me off. The author decided to ditch her ass in a pathetic way. I think she is in the upper realms where Yun Che is right now. For some reason every one of Yun Ches woman miracously finds a portal to another dimension. She is definitely alive and so is her child.

Yeah Honestly you are right. So many writers practically place themselves in the romance part of the novel. I do understand it is very hard to write and all since which one of us enjoys a harem lol. But seriously I feel that most authors who write harem practically place there own reactions to the romance part. That’s not bad but sometimes it feels forced and it becomes a strange type of chemistry. Like I saw an author say the mc wanted to protect with his life a girl he just met and fell in love with? This was in the second chapter btw. So yeah i didn’t know what bullshit that was but the girl accepted his love like they knew each other. They got married the next week -.-

DrunkenShadow Clearly he would have specified if he wanted that. I think that also is considered romance lol

Lord_of_Potatoes I’ll check em out.

DeJeL Mm I haven’t seen much successful earth transmigrations yet. Except for a few with systems and whatnot. You do have a point tho because at the end of the day majority mc have that fake righteous persona.

Lord_of_Potatoes Good advice I’ll be sure to check out your novel!

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/11680482406469805

Give my novel a try I’d love to have some opinions.

Also a new novel I am interested in is the devoured give that a read.

Deleteedaccount it has to do with the format. I think the best one to use is jpg. Use an online converter to convert the file into jpg