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YvisEV I'm down, here's mine

https://www.webnovel.com/book/sun-saint-nexus-luminas_27136764005529605

@AuHNG just read the first prologue. I liked the whole concept of the story and I already got hooked in first read so I added it to my collection .

So Here's my suggestion. I'm a peson who likes feeling the ambience of a scene so I would recommend to incorporate a detailed or just a brief descreption of where, when, and what is the setting of the whole scene just to emphasize the vibe it embodies whether it is calm, chaotic, or whatever. But Put a little grain of salt on this cause Im just starting to write novels so, yeah

@AuHNG I'm still a newbie but i'll try to give my insights .
https://www.webnovel.com/book/sun-saint-nexus-luminas_27136764005529605