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Hi, I want you to proofread my book and tell me the mistakes, what should I include, what is not seems fine with the genre or anything. In return, I will proofread yours.
Are you interested, tell me?
Hi, I want you to proofread my book and tell me the mistakes, what should I include, what is not seems fine with the genre or anything. In return, I will proofread yours.
Are you interested, tell me?
Jenival_Enyia Done Adding and giving a honest review.... the story is great keep writing. https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-shadows-between-us_24449948105516805
Majer3 Can you let me know your discord name or you can search me Fluffybarries29#3811
Majer3 Yeah, I should notify them more. The problem is there were robbers in the kingdom who were robbing the citizens. Yeah, I think I hadn't mentioned it in the chapter. But the complaints about the kingdom firstly come to the Chief commissioners, Alvis who was ordered to solve them and later inform him about every problem. He was ill as I mentioned in the first chapter with the maid scene so the readers could get through the robbers scene. But now I think I should write it in the king's dialogue that "I was ill and you don't even care to inform me about this matter." I will edit the part of king's dialogue. So, readers could get it easily. By the way, I was making the process of ML and FL to come closer. I am thankful to you for pointing out the mistakes that I even don't consider.
AYESHA_FAHIM I remember you. I will review
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AYESHA_FAHIM yeah I will wait
Eva_Smith_0875 I don't get any review from you.
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AYESHA_FAHIM I add your book in my library but as I start reading. You just updated 1 chapter and in 15h. I can't review yours now if i did just reading one chapter it will look fake. Your book isn't in vetting process yet... Please write few more chapters than ask for a honest review. As I said, it will look fake. I can't review honestly right now You can mention me (fluffybarries29) again after your book comes in your original work
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