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Let me just sneak on in and advertise my novel in this thread as well.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/10716637506145005/Guide-Souls%3A-Chronicles

If you have the time, leave a review or comment about what you think, it would mean the world to me!

creativewritting Thanks for the review!

I kind of figured it would be the dialogue that needs work, I've never really been a social person. This is something I feel would get better over time, but I'll keep an eye out from now on.

When the great 'mass edit' happens I'll be sure to read my chapters out loud, thanks for the suggestion.

P.S. Well my prologue is the shortest chapter :) But on this site I can see why it could be considered long.

I would love for my novel to be reviewed, since no one has so far :(

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10716637506145005/Guide-Souls%3A-Chronicles
Genre: Fantasy

What i'm mainly concerned about is if my novel is interesting (since nobody has commented or reviewed) and also if there is any grammar which detract from the novel.
Since I run my chapters through grammarly I know about some of the issues the premium feature picks up; mainly word choice and passive voice. I would like to know anything that grammarly won't pick up so I can keep them in mind when writing, and fix when I eventually get around to a mass edit.

I release 6+ a week

P.S. Review up to Chapter 2 please, as the Prologue is a short chapter.

Thanks in advance! :D