The Chronicles of Lynn Wolfe

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Excerpt :
Bloody carcasses and writhing, mutilated bodies of unknown creatures and humans formed a small mound of flesh, brain matter, limbs, and bloody organs that covered the ground.
A bare naked boy lay in the midst of this carnage covered piece of the world. A pair of black sabers lay near his blood-covered body; their hilts tightly held by the boy.
His blank lifeless black eyes stared into the two moons of Pangaea, menacingly glowing with a reddish hue in the night sky.
A soft sound like a paper being torn could be heard as a teardrop-shaped crack appeared in the space above the naked boy.
The scrawny boy, still holding his sabers, stretched his right hand as he reached toward the gateway in space.
He vanished and emerged to the unsuspecting world beyond.

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The Chronicles of Lynn Wolfe

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-chronicles-of-lynn-wolfe_18556669705122605

Excerpt :
Bloody carcasses and writhing, mutilated bodies of unknown creatures and humans formed a small mound of flesh, brain matter, limbs, and bloody organs that covered the ground.
A bare naked boy lay in the midst of this carnage covered piece of the world. A pair of black sabers lay near his blood-covered body; their hilts tightly held by the boy.
His blank lifeless black eyes stared into the two moons of Pangaea, menacingly glowing with a reddish hue in the night sky.
A soft sound like a paper being torn could be heard as a teardrop-shaped crack appeared in the space above the naked boy.
The scrawny boy, still holding his sabers, stretched his right hand as he reached toward the gateway in space.
He vanished and emerged to the unsuspecting world beyond.

The Chronicles of Lynn Wolfe

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-chronicles-of-lynn-wolfe_18556669705122605

Excerpt :
Bloody carcasses and writhing, mutilated bodies of unknown creatures and humans formed a small mound of flesh, brain matter, limbs, and bloody organs that covered the ground.
A bare naked boy lay in the midst of this carnage covered piece of the world. A pair of black sabers lay near his blood-covered body; their hilts tightly held by the boy.
His blank lifeless black eyes stared into the two moons of Pangaea, menacingly glowing with a reddish hue in the night sky.
A soft sound like a paper being torn could be heard as a teardrop-shaped crack appeared in the space above the naked boy.
The scrawny boy, still holding his sabers, stretched his right hand as he reached toward the gateway in space.
He vanished and emerged to the unsuspecting world beyond.