Hey, thanks for taking the time to help out. I'll go take care of what you mentioned and try and revise what I can while going through my old chapters. hehe, appreciate it pal!
FlowingTime

- Jun 18, 2018
- Joined Apr 30, 2018
Hello,
I'd love to have a review on my fiction as well!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10491892106047905/Jupiter's-Rising
Title: Jupiter's Rising
Genre: Fantasy, magic, some game elements.Focus is mainly on character going on an adventure from a sedentary life but I noticed that character development is quite the challenge while progressing the story in a fun a natural way.
I also want to mention I already realized that my whole beginning seems to be a stretched to about 31 chapters before any real action ensues....I update 2 chapters every other day usually, and have a lot to work towards to make my novel fun and "light"
Thank you for taking the time!
Shameless self promotion YAYAY
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10491892106047905/Jupiter's-Rising
AYE!
So i've been curious for a while but like...
where do I go to shamelessly promote my original novel? Is there a new novel thread? A shamelessness contest event?
Where can one's shame be judged by an expert panel of judges so that I may self- promote and then disappear?
Hahaha, Do we have something like that? If we do i'd love to be let in on the info!
Thanks a lot my fellow daoists
- for the road to cultivate is long but we have ourselves and our shamelessness to carry us onwards!
Quote by Lord third. I think...
NineNeatherBird@Edgaaaar AWESOME PAWSOMEMEMESSSSSSS! Thanks :D
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[Title]
Jupiter's Rising
[Pen Name]
FlowingTime
[The link of your work]
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10491892106047905/Jupiter%27s-Rising
[Three keywords about the cover]
Planet background, Shadow cloacked male, greenblue slime (slime is technically inside the MC head... very close buddies you could say. )
[Inform us]
Edgaaaar Thank you!!! :)