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1: I got nothing against you bro but seriously constructive criticism is fine, but you could have done a quick google to verify some of your questions because to me you're not questioning me just the limitations of your own imagination. It's a fantasy with a basis in reality !!!! Why do you feel the need to tell me to change elements of my story? Why would I change his age? When there are people that were younger who earned the same qualifications in real life? Why would I not write about smart people? there are no standards to smart people.... they can be villainous and as righteous as the next person.

2: He is 15, asking why he makes decisions like oversleeping and being late is like asking why an intelligent person doesn't always have a clean room. The answer is right in front of your face. Intelligence does not mean you will automatically have wisdom, just because you are smart does not mean you cant live a life like regular people do.

3: Why can't he be 15 with a P.H.D, or a martial artist? There are people in real life who achieved more for instance. Karl Witte earned his P.H.D at 13 years old, Kim Ung Yong received his at 15, like do I even need to bring up the degrees they earned along side those, the many areas of study they mastered to even get the P.H.D? Point is many things are possible just because it seems strenuous and ridiculous to you doesn't mean that others cant do it.

4: What resources? He is a 15 year old genius. In our current era we have Universities with scholarship and grant programs that would shell out ridiculous sums to have a kid like that go to their schools. Do I even need to elaborate on why he was able to earn a P.H.D? By all means it's just the intro I didn't wan to go so deep into things that I though people would know better about especially when he would die anyway, the most important aspect was to get to the main story.

5: The murder may deserve some tweaking, but it's pretty much self explanatory. In this story I theorize on what the advancements of Dark Matter & The Higgs boson may mean to us as a people. What price would you pay if the Higgs Boson leads to advancements in space travel the same way satellites led to cellphones? The truth is any government would do anything! There is no need for a major grudge its strictly the price of benefits. Also the story's starting point is clearly America so it would be the U.S government right? Once again self explanatory, not everyone wants to see another genius rising, this is apparent in our real world where many people with talent are overshadowed by people who are just popular, it would make sense to steal his advancements and eliminate him so he cant claim it later.

SnoozySloth I guess my wording is wrong. I see your point, heavy readers will most likely know about such a thing. Yet Clowniac is confusing me, although the story has a basis in reality it's still ultimately fiction. I figure I can write that Obama found the Higgs Boson as long as I don't get its "theorized attributes" wrong. I also don't understand what he means by those who know better? Who on this earth actually knows anything definitive about the Higgs boson? including the people who actually found it?

Hello ladies & gentlemen, I'm the author of Space Immortal it's been an absolute pleasure writing this story and left up to my own devices I would probably create something even more immersive than what I have now. Yet there is a way for the story to become more immersive without me having to go back to the drawing board and that is with your reviews. I would love for your reviews to be brutally honest. The realer it gets the better the story can be for us all.
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