HiatusLord

  • Nov 5, 2018
  • Joined Sep 3, 2018
  • TawnyWrites @HiatusLord let's review swap! Help each other out :)

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12013957905760805

    Title: Desolate Mage: A Legend Reborn

    History’s youngest legendary mage has a broken heart.
    While he fought to defend Earth against other-worldly invaders; his fiancée and childhood sweetheart of 10 years chose to marry another man!
    With nothing to live for; he leads a squad of his closest brothers and sisters to cross over and scout their invader’s world - only to be wiped out; betrayed by the squads big brother, their most trusted member.
    On the brink of death; his soul is protected and reincarnated by a mystical necklace his former lover gave him…
    …And contracted to a demon – to wreak havoc across the planes.

    Will he find new hope for living?
    Will he make it back alive and escape the curse of the demon…? Or be found out as a spy and executed...?
    How will he survive when he falls in love with an impossible lover – his world's sworn enemies...!

    • daoist_om @HiatusLord Here's my 2 cents - write more.

      @daoist_om I remember we review swapped 3 weeks ago. But I see you still only have a few chapters. Online readers will not be engaged or interested with an inactive novel without chapters. Each chapter is a conversation with your reader. If you aren't communicating with them, they won't be responding to you.

      • Adolfo13 That's not how these 8k views work. I assume they count +1 each time somebody views one of the chapters. So, it's at least 8k divided by the number chapters you got. And, if it also counts when somebody views the front page of your novel... really hard to work with these numbers.

        @HiatusLord As others said, there are many lurking readers who don't leave much comments or reviews. Try asking for reviews in the author notes of every chapter, may spark some activity from your readers.

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