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Novel name : Mafia Brother?
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I’m an amateur writer and I don’t know if my book is actually good or what is it lacking. I’m sure there is a lot of things I lack but I didn’t know how to improve it. I hope someone can help me to review my novel and give me feedback and suggestions to improve.
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Novel: Mafia Brother?
Genre : Fantasy, Romance, Action
Summary : I was born in a happy family with a loving parents and a caring brother until everything fall down into ruins caused by a mere misunderstanding and lies. My ignorance and foolishness puts oil into the fire as I feign to be the victim and keep my heart sealed off any truth. I point my blade to my loved one and keep my eyes shut towards what has happen. As time pass my heart turn frozen, regret filled in as I was him lay on my hand soaked in his own blood, turning limp and blue. I cried but will my tears cover up for my retributions?
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Title: Mafia Brother?
I was born in a happy family with loving parents and a caring brother until everything falls down into ruins caused by a mere misunderstanding and lies. My ignorance and foolishness put oil into the fire as I feign to be the victim and keep my heart sealed off any truth. I point my blade to my loved one and keep my eyes shut towards what has happened. As time passed my heart turn frozen, regret-filled in as I was him lay on my hand soaked in his own blood, turning limp and blue. I cried but will my tears cover-up for my retributions?
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Title : Mafia Brother?
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/mafia-brother_18928037905605105
Genres: Fantasy, Drama, Action, Family and Friends, Love
Synopsis:
I was born in a happy family with a loving parents and a caring brother until everything fall down into ruins caused by a mere misunderstanding and lies. My ignorance and foolishness puts oil into the fire as I feign to be the victim and keep my heart sealed off any truth. I point my blade to my loved one and keep my eyes shut towards what has happen. As time pass my heart turn frozen, regret filled in as I was him lay on my hand soaked in his own blood, turning limp and blue. I cried but will my tears cover up for my retributions?
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