Hi all,
Just started writing my first story. Super keen for any feedbacks/criticisms.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-don't-want-to-come-out_24208202105764605
It's a contemporary sci-fi dark fantasy.
SYNOPSIS
Things are different now. Anyone can create anything even beyond the boundaries of this world with a piece of computer.
Here is a girl, betrayed by her own country and went into isolation. She became a shut-in only to gain more freedom than anyone could possible hope to have.
She finds peace, joy and fun in her solitary life. But those who betrayed her robbed her of the only humble wish this innocent girl has. Consumed by the rage of her instincts, she eliminated all threats.
Unfortunately, things do not end there. She was captured by an even more vicious group. A group that controls a dark society which the likes of everyday people like us never imagine would exist.
A society filled with monsters crawling on its underbelly.
What's going to happen to her now?