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Hi, new author here. Tried a few fanfictions before trying to start my own original novel. Still though, it seems that getting views on fanfictions is easier than on novels. If there is an experienced author here, or anyone really, I just need an honest review to try and better my writing.

The name of my novel is :Reylan Emberblade: A Journey Through life.

Thank you in advance for any advice or any tips you can give me.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/reylan-emberblade-a-journey-through-life_27310405306355505