I have to say I didn't think I'd like it at first however I must admit you did a great job, it looks a whole lot better, I also love the new weekly reward for reading time just wish it went higher as I basically finished them in a day. Overall major improvement great work.
Light_Knight
- Feb 23, 2021
- Joined Nov 19, 2017
SYNOPSIS:
Bob is an average scientist.
One day he visits his friend at his new laboratory to see what he's working on and to get insperation. To his shock he is informed it is a time machine, time to have a look?
...
What could possibly go wrong.
STORY:
Bob has no idea how Dave managed to convince him to try out the time machine but his pride would not allow him to bail out.
ZipZapWizz
There's a bright flash.
Bob stumbles around and when he can finally think straight he realises he's in the Jurassic Era and not in the planned "feudal" era. He immediately starts to plan how to survive and the problems he could face while he waits the hour needed for the time-space continuum to settle before traveling back to the future.
He doesn't think too much tho.
This is mainly, actually, completely based on the fact he was near instantly crushed by a Brachiosaurus.
In the near future,
Dave proceeded to receive a Nobel prize and never mentioned Bob as he was a story in the past. (And would make him seem like a trash person for kind of killing his friend)
The end.