Hello.
Is there a someone who could look at my story and give an honest comment on it. For example, maybe I don't write well and my grammar is bad. I'm not saying anything about the review, since no one gives them here for free. 
https://www.webnovel.com/book/broken-wing-tail-and-ears_23726652605596105
Thanks.
Try to read my story.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/broken-wing-tail-and-ears_23726652605596105
Synopsis
Surviving a car accident and losing the ability to walk, Julia loses touch with the old world. She is looking for her meaning in life and finds it in virtual games. Moreover, one of the games offers the fulfillment of a cherished wish…