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Title: The Universe is Innately Just (UIJ)

Genre: Sci-Fi

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Hey, I started my novel a little while ago but I had a big pause so I'm not very experienced for now, I would love if some of you guys could read my novel and give some feedback about it!

It's all about a teenager in the middle of the worst time of his life trying to get himself out of New Casablanca's slums. His fate was uncertain until the day he met a strong blue-haired stranger in the oddest. That encounter sealed his future as his strong will was unleashed.

Hello Everyone. LividEdge Here.

I'm an original author here in WN since late 2018. I'm doing this post to announce that my novel is resuming again, and for this grand occasion. Shameless . I'm organizing a giveaway of a 100SS gift code.

Go read my last chapter for further information. Shameless.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

If you have a better idea for the contest's format, please share them with this shameless one!

I'll shamelessly introduce my shameless MC. He's a cultivator that was born in the slums, and he tend to act quite carefree!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

TheMash I can only agree with what you said.
If you are looking for a scheming mc who slowly reveal his cards. WMW is a great read!

Hello! Check my novel, its an eastern fantasy (xianxia) that start in a futuristic cyberpunk setting. It's dark and gritty, and will probably satisfy your crave.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Hello, i'm always looking for constructive criticism. Feel free to rate my first work.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Hello, my novel is an eastern fantasy genre that begin in a sci-fi setting.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

StenDuring I'll drop a review after reading your work.

Unfortunately, i'm currently in the middle of my midterms finals, i'll definitly drop a review when i finish them.

Would love having the review of an experienced writter, i still feel that my writing is flawed and would love some advice.
Author: SmarthLad

Title: The Universe is Innately Just

Genre: Eastern Fantasy

Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Synopsis: The Universe doesn't care whether a certain thing is right or wrong, rather it exists in a weird state of equilibrium where everything has its polar opposite. From the singularity that birthed the universe to the celestial objects seen throughout its rapid expansion, every single lifeform, every single object, every single particle, is subjected to this principle.

In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.

If it's possible, try to review based on all the chapters, as i already got reviews on the first three chapters.
If not just enjoy the read and share with me some insight!

ValentinaKhan Much better, now i see your points. Basically i need to focus more on showing the story, helping the readers visualize the universe.
As for the starting point, i did explain that the slums weren't exactly new constructs which might have caused me to lessen details in the first chapters.
I'll try to focus more on those aspects of writing during the course of my story.
Do you know some learning material that could help me better my writing?

Thanks for the insights!

ValentinaKhan Do you care developping your thoughts?
Because except telling me to write in a First Person POV you didn't explain what was bad or good. Maybe you could show me how to better my Third Person narrator writing skills by rephrasing some of my paraphrases if you don't mind.
Please do better develop what you want me to understand!

ValentinaKhan Do you mind reviewing my work?
I finished writing the prologue volume of my story and will soon start uploading the chapter of volume 1.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Feel free to give me your most honest thought on my work!

Thanks for this, i just finished the prologue and would love to have some thoughts on the beginning of my story!

Author: SmarthLad
Title: The Universe is Innately Just
Genre: Futuristic setting, Cultivation, Magical Realism
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just
Synopsis:
In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.

Thanks for your review guys, i listened to what you said and tried to deepen my skills.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Share with me your thoughts on the change i did!

Hello, i'll follow the wave and be as shameless as the rest.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just

Feel free to share your thoughts on my first work, i'm trying to better myself as a writer and storyteller.

Hello everyone, i'm currently participating in the Phenomenal Author writing contest.

I'm having some trouble judging my own work and i'm looking for some people to check my progress.
Like i said in the title, it's my first time exercising my writing skills and i'm in need of some reviews from readers.

Feel free to go take a look at my story, don't forget to share your thoughts on it.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just