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Done, hope you enjoy it 
It's called The Reunion: a journey to klin and back
M_Ni
- Jul 30, 2023
- Joined Dec 20, 2022
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Slow_Neptune
Thank you very much It's my first time writing so it was a bumpy start 
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Slow_Neptune
http://wbnv.in/a/01hbjCN
It's called The Reunion: a journey to Klin and back
I wrote a review for your story! It's so beautifully written and I enjoyed it so far
I posted a link to my story on my other account, I would be delighted to know your opinion on it. Thank you and happy writing
Hope you like mine too- Edited
http://wbnv.in/a/01hbjCNThe Reunion: a journey through Klin and back is a story about two immortal lovers who kept their relationship a secret from others for one hundred years. On the day of their anniversary, Zazuza, the chieftain's daughter, finds out a what her boyfriend, Yan, had been working on all these years. Because of the implications of his inventions she runs off only to be captured by a gang of bandits. Where will their story go from here? Read to find out more!
The story is filled with characters of all backgrounds and creeds. The tall dark and handsome general Uluki who dreams of early retirement. Zico, the alcoholic, irresponsible older brother of Zazuza with a knack for diplomacy. The Chieftain himself: a cheerful yet exasperated man, who's made more and more enemies because of his daughter's aparent disinterest in suitors. Yan, the crafty inventor from a far away land with commitment issues and a dark secret. Zazuza, the loyal late maiden whose lies might cost her more than she bargained for.
And Let, the leader of the bandits who comes across a mysterious mask upon which Klin, the city of lies, will be built upon.