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For some time I have been wondering, what value do coins have? I mean, how much are 200 coins in dollars? I can't find that information anywhere. Someone knows? I want to better understand the remuneration to the authors, the same happens with the gifts. I feel that webnovel does not give enough information to the authors or I have not found it, I would like to know where to learn that.

Ghostuchichq From what I understand, fanfics cannot be monetized

Drei05 Thank you

I have a question, what happens is that I get a notification that my novel will be recommended in <Fresh Stories> but I have no idea what this portal is, can someone tell me in detail?

vorlefan Very interesting, the story catches you in a second, its writing is good too, very fluid and simple. I already left you a review.

Miss_Asriya Hello, I read the first chapter of your story if I have time later I will continue reading, for now I will tell you what I think. Before that, I tell you that I'm not fond of your genre, but I'll be as objective as possible. I also clarify that it's just my point of view, it doesn't mean that I'm right and you're not, just an opinion, so I'll start.
First, your first paragraph is repeated.
I think that you are very descriptive in all the scenes, in my opinion being a web novel you can ignore some things, avoiding describing things like the type, style, color and shape of the clothes that your protagonist wears and in the same way the scenarios. I think the sequence of events if you shortened that description would look more fluid and interesting.
I put a couple of examples on the paragraph comments of the book.
Now ignore some descriptions, but know how to do it, notice that when your main character arrived at the admissions office, she simply asked what interested her immediately, but she was in a hurry, it would be good if you included some fatigue or heavy breathing, something like that.
Lastly, I don't think the justification for your main character being so upset about being late is convincing, in the end she had to expose herself to everyone and introduce herself, I think inventing something like "The academic director had warned her that he would punish her if she was late the first day" or something like that, is better, I don't know.

I also hope your honest comment
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-best-on-the-court_26018446306943305

Hello people, I started a new book, I would like opinions, thank you.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-best-on-the-court_26018446306943305

I also attached my first book in case you are interested too.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-eros_25265983605385705

Ghostuchichq Hello, bro, I read your book and I have some comments that may be useful to you, since they were highlighted to me recently and I see that you have similarities to me.

First, you should start with a more vivid scene, for example, taking your words you could do something like this: “In a strange room that I don't recognize I look around without knowing what is happening, I soon realize that it is a hospital room, damn! !!, I'm a baby, what happened here? And since god answering my question I remembered what had happened”, so you could explain here what happened before death and end in some funny way the fact that the character couldn't buy the game.

In the second chapter, I think it can be a little more complex, in my first novel a reader strongly made me see the same mistake that I see you also make and it is to spend a whole chapter telling the story of your character and his family, I think you can put more content and little by little in the story reveal those details.

These are just some recommendations to improve points that someone recently told me and I think they apply to you, in fact I myself am still not able to fix that bad habit, but it is to be taken into account, the concept of the story is good, I am a lover of Pokémon too so good luck.

I leave you the link of my novel for your comments, be honest only then it gets better.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-best-on-the-court_26018446306943305

Nou Thank you very much, honestly I had felt many of the points you mentioned, but sometimes when you review your work yourself it seems that certain things that are obvious were not seen, I appreciate the honesty and detail about the story.

Hello everyone, requested your strength and help. I have been writing on the portal for some time now, but I have very little feedback from readers and I honestly don't know what I should improve on. I know my grammar can't be the best, since English is not my mother tongue, but I would like to know opinions about the plot, the characters or anything. That's why I created this discussion asking for help I want to improve and I know it's rude to ask for help without anything in return, so I can only offer what I ask for, I can read some stories and offer my comments.

I thank you in advance for the help and attached my book.
[https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-eros_25265983605385705]