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Fuck it I really want feedbacks on my novel so I'll post it here hopefully anyone would check it out

TL;DR synopsis - A renowned hitman betrayed by his partner while on a mission. Protag got sent to another world where sword and magic prosper and treacherous beast roam the land. Sent to the other world without so much as a reason or even a cheat power not only that his power upon his birth was not even remotely close to average. How will a person who only knows how to kill navigate through this world?

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12752686705059805

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Please check out my novel
I really want to receive some feedback on it, any criticism is very welcome. lay it on me. Grammar wise I know It sucks and want to improve on it but still criticism on it is greatly appreciated.

Author: PerishAndRuin
Title: Swan Dive Riot
Genre: Fantasy, Isekai
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12752686705059805/Swan-Dive-Riot
Synopsis:
One of the best hitman on earth, earned the nickname "The Walking Disaster", misforture has clung to him since the day he was born, but other than that his skill were top class.

He was even considered a living weapon by the government.

While tasked to eliminate a prominent individual he was betrayed by his partner in turn leading to his death.

His soul inevitably sucked into another world reincarnating him into a baby still intact with his previous memories, skills, and knowledge of his past life.

All the more this world is a world of sword, magic, and.. Monstrous creatures? It doesn't help that the power that is bestowed on him is next to nothing? it seems his bad luck has carried over to this world as well.

How will a highly trained assassin that only knows how to kill maneuver through this world?

How will he find out the reason for this reincarnation?