Polarize4777

  • May 27, 2020
  • Joined Nov 17, 2017
  • Skully_ Thank you for your advice and I will do my best in practicing my first 200 thousand words. This will be a hurdle for me, will try my best to write without throwing too much fluff into my writing. While I am at it I will try to learn how to organize event points and set up an ending before I even start writing just so I know where I want to take my story. Also i will be more careful on my use of characters so that they don't feel like 2D cardboard, another point I would like to ask you is if you have multiple character sheets for all your characters quirks, traits, background, and etc?
    Another question for you if you don't mind answering, How many time do you rewrite a chapter so that it can be a better experience for us readers?
    Again thank you for your time and advice, have a good day!

    About to start college, but that won't stop me from trying to write in my free time to practice and hopefully one day have my novel on this site get reviews and maybe a brutal review from you or a nice one.

    • MasterRabbink LOL that comment and question Is hilarious XD. Its almost like some cultivation novel saying of "You have eyes, and yet you can't see mount Tai".

      • Good novel lol, I completely forgot about this one if no one had brought it up. +1
        Also keep in mind that this novel already has a great deal of free chapters which mean it could have a very low chance of being picked up by WN. But hey don't let that stop your upvote, heck just keep pounding the door until you get notices. :D

        • Skully_ If in the far future i see this novel becoming an anime, you know what I will be doing __. I also just realize you have a review thread on this forum Skully, which is hilarious with its brutal and nice reviews. Your novel inspire me to keep striving to write my own novel, which is hard sometime when i get stuck due to a lack of confidence because of grammar and writing consistency. However, your novel help keep the flame of novel writing lit up for me and I will keep practicing and learning from better authors on how to further my story telling skills. I also wonder if you have a section in your discord where you have resources or tips for amateur authors, who are still beating around the bush to get the feel of writing a story. Also can you please give me a discord link to put in my discord server search so that i can hook up to get in directly.
          Thank you for stopping by and keep up the good work!!

          • Yeah this post could use more traction and notices lol. So there will be more supporter for such a great novel. XD

            • Well I will be dam, i was beat by 1 month -__-! but hey at least i was second lol.

              • LOL, this was here before all the other request thread for this novel even made it up here when people realize it was a good novel lol.

                • Surprisingly I never thought I would take some time out to write a review for a novel and also go to the extent of helping it get some notices from the large reader base on this site. The book which I am interested in trying to convince other readers to try is tittle Daedalus. The story premise is intriguing since it throws us in the year of 2100+, and during such age, humanity is united instead of waging war like we are supposed to do in any eras. The story revolves around Deado who is an introvert with an AI he created name Mirmidon that accompany him on his adventure to be both the best mech designer and pilot. The plot of the story has enormous potential if I am guessing correctly as to the course of the author's writing. The writing is smooth, grammar errors are low, and the story progresses at an even pace without time jump and plenty of character developments. Mechs are the main show of the events with a mix of mystery, machinations, strategy, and multiple POV which is fantastic for world development as we unravel the secrets that the author set up in the story. I have so much to say yet not being able to put it all together quite clearly which leave me with the invitation to those who had read this far to come and join the already existing Novel Community in celebrating the fact that there is another great novel to come.
                  Click HERE to start your journey: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11290957706315405/Daedalus
                  Message for those who have tried the novel and dislike the way the story was written, please be kind and critical in your reviews instead of just blasting it with a KAMEHAMEHA of 1star rating that goes with a hurtful comment that does nothing but hurt the author's confidence and believes in him/herself.
                  Thank you, and please do enjoy the journey!!

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                  Also forgot to mention, the first few chapters will be kind of rough, but after that is where the adventures will genuinely start, and boy are you going to be in for a journey of humorous laughter and butt clenching anticipation for the next chapter.

                  • [unknown]
                    Nah, LOL that is why i rather wait years long and comeback to binge read.

                    • _Haze_
                      AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                      Poof! System notification: You have attained level 4!
                      Continue to steal valuable materials and eat pills to further your cultivation ><
                      Level 1: White paper
                      Level 2: Stain paper
                      Level 3: Color paper
                      Level 4: Pattern paper
                      Level 5: Pattern color paper
                      level 6: Origami paper
                      Level 7: Folded and bend paper
                      Level 8: Recycle bin
                      Level 9: Blended with the paper forces
                      Level 10: Blank paper
                      Congratulation on your cultivation journey!!

                      • SilverCookie
                        Happy New Year to you too SilverCookie and I wish you a splendid time this new year!!
                        Also thank you for the like.

                      • UnluckyDude

                        Hey there buddy, I just found your post and wonder if this was a coincidence LOL. I also really like Chronicle of Primordial Wars, and just want to drop by to give you a message and reply to your request. Originally i thought about wanting Quidian to also bring it onto the novel voting area, however found out that would be rude and inconsiderate to the current translator of the novel. So what I am saying is that the only way this could happen without Quidian reputation going down the drain is if they contact the current translator and hire him/her to do translation which will pay them, in return we get a faster release while they get pay. But again it is a project that belong to Lesyt so it would be really rude to suggest it to Quidian and have their project taken away from them. But yeah I am with you on the need for a faster release however the method to obtain that is not necessarily the best as what you are suggesting will hurt the translator and probably incite wrath from Lesyt readers.

                        • typicaly97
                          Thank you for the like on my discussion Xiefang, I didn't know how to give you a reply so yeah I just find one of your comment and reply back using it. Also have a happy new year and good luck in whatever you do! ^

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