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Amaza_Rashi please review my book by reading at least 12 chapters. It's about the multiverse. I want to improve my future content and that's why I need your help. Please review my work. https://www.webnovel.com/book/onslaught-universe-without-a-conscience_23645144105912905

Megan_Immanuella please review my book by reading at least 12 chapters. It's about the multiverse. I want to improve my future content and that's why I need your help. Please review my work. https://www.webnovel.com/book/onslaught-universe-without-a-conscience_23645144105912905

Please read my work and review my work as a new writer. My story has a lot of elements in it and it has a lot of sub-jones but all of that will come together at one point.
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Saint_Grey . I am a new writer and want my work to be reviewed please read my work and let me know what my weak points are.
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