Paradise of Death

Hey i am starting writing a new novel, about apocalypse who is a theme that i like.
Link: Paradise of Dearh
Synopse:
“What does a good person? What is the meaning of good and evil? Who can define the rules of a society?
Wrapped in a fog that swallowed even the worst of
unknowns, a fog that tests the concept of intelligent race, a fog with a relentless will created by the world and indifferent to itself, In 2150 Green's world was faced with these questions, all beings of the planet felt in unison an implacable will, which seemed to come from the center of the galaxy and which spread like a cold that could freeze the cries of a terminal individual.
So when everyone was frozen facing the void in front of them doubtful of their own existence, a calm and warm will like a sunbeam illuminated his thoughts and whispered in his ear:
For those who listen to me...
...I...
...Your God, came to do what you always asked me to do...
...I came to take your souls to paradise
And then the concept of existence seemed to disappear for a moment, everyone felt their bodies funtluing in a sticky and warm liquid that warmed their souls, only for a second after confront the emptiness "
Aslam - The Paragon of Abyss in The beginning of extermination