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TomGutshall
- May 5, 2021
- Joined Jul 15, 2019
Title: Lonely Chloe Slowly Growing
Genre: Fantasy, Apocalypse
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17120918905542605/Lonely-Chloe-Slowly-Growing
Synopsis:
Chloe is a young, innocent child, who has to learn to survive in the abandoned streets of San FranciscoUntil She Isn't
Staire will always be close by to protect her, whenever she calls for him
Until He Isn't
NotUse
I read the first two chapters. I don't have the stamina to finish it this moment, but your story is actually quite intriguing. The premise meshes nicely with your story telling. The only advice I would give you is to not spend too much time on prose. It is enjoyable to read at first, but slowly becomes more monotonous overtime, causing me to want to skip over it. In every other regard, you did an excellent job.Blank_thought
sure thingBlank_thought If you're going to review my story, please tell me which parts need to be done better. I need to know what to ditch and burn, that way the good parts aren't buried under trash. I can also review a story of yours.
This is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17119018306664505/FrictionlessFinalWriter Please let me know if my book is shit. The only way a shit book gets better is by tearing out the terrible and replacing it with mediocre, and then good, and then finally great. I'll also review your webnovel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/17119018306664505/Frictionless