Future_M_Animator
Good! Did it.
Tzar
- Joined Nov 4, 2017
NOVEL LINK -> https://www.webnovel.com/book/shonen-character-system!_22244785206340605?utm_source=noahActivity
Synopsis
It's hard to be the main character, you know? There's a reason why people always dream of being a wise old teacher or a villain. It's even harder when the world you were brought into simply refuses to use the common shonen tropes... Sometimes you have to shapeshift and roleplay half of the cast for the story to go on...
'Ring-ring! Just look at the time, hero. It's time for a training ark!
Remember, you can buy a boost! By using it, you will double the experience you receive for every life-threatening training session. Oh, you will triple the experience, was the session to include an alligator! He-he-he...''What, again? How about we'll rather have a beach episode? I need to earn some points with fanservice to buy a [Plot Armor].
'Oh, so you want a harem? Easily done! Next genre - Yaoi-harem!'
'I take my words back... I take them back!'
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Not yaoi, by the way.
Review swap anyone? I'm currently participating in WPC, so power stones will be appreciated.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/shonen-character-system!_22244785206340605?utm_source=noahActivityAnyone up for a review swap? Just 6 chapters (for now), male-lead.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/shonen-hero-system_21243732106932105###
https://www.webnovel.com/book/shonen-hero-system_21243732106932105###
It's hard to be the main character, you know? There's a reason why people always dream of being a wise old teacher or a villain.
'Ring-ring! Just look at the time, hero. It's time for a training ark!
Remember, you can buy a boost! By using it, you will double the experience you receive for every life-threatening training session. Oh, you will triple the experience, were the session to include an alligator! He-he-he...''What, again? How about we'll rather have a beach episode? Kind of need to earn some score with fanservice to buy a plot armor, you know.
'Oh, so you want a harem? Easily done! Next genre - Yaoi-harem!'
'I take my words back... I take them back!'
...
Not yaoi, by the way.
Hello there, a simple question. How long does it usually take for a novel to go through the vetting process so it will be able to receive power stones?
Nou
1. Well then, synopsis. It’s a story about a boy who is a scion of the clan destroyed by the Emperor for an unknown reason (will be revealed in Prolog). Right now, he lives with his only remaining servant in mansion hidden in the mountains. Then, something happens that drives him out on a long journey far away. World (as I can reveal now) consists of one great Empire that was united not too long ago and unknown lands to the far north (mostly jungle). Right now the Empire is in process of colonizing them.I tried to make him believable. He’s pretty naïve as of now and often dreams about future. However, he will have to go through tribulation that will change him a lot making more logical and pragmatic. Actually, he will go through several stages of development.
I’d rather say that it was an emotional decision. After all, that character was euphoric at the moment of making it.
No, I myself sometimes confused about how I should imagine IET’s distances. It’s more about the size of Empire and its population. Nothing critical, but could have been done better.
Well, we’ll see! Challenge is always interesting.
- Edited
1) 1. Title – don’t know if I'm allowed to tell it. Either way, the title starts to make sense only really far in the story, at least 1000 chapters.
2. Synopsis, well, I can’t really write it without spoilers. There is a plot twist in first 10 chapters. Basically, it’s a Xuanhuan, but a bit different. More focus on characters, worldbuilding, I also like to write something unexpected for the reader. MC’s goal is changing along the way (he is just 10 years old now), but at first, he wants to survive. The first arc (without prolog) is about a long journey into unknown lands.2) Grammar, I’ve got to know about the competition only 6 days before the end (I know, lame excuse). I wrote about 4000 words a day while having to attend classes at my university. What’s more, English isn’t my first language… It’s bad. I even fear to reread it now because, even though I spent one day solely editing, I still spot mistakes in every paragraph. What is really embarrassing, is that I even made a typo in my Writer Information Form which was 20 words long… In addition, there is too much drama in first few chapters, so readers may think that it will be a dark story. It won’t, the story will have a lot of different tones. I plan a long novel, after all.
One character makes a very important decision that looks stupid, while he's kind of an intelligent type. I think I should have explained his reasons a bit more because I already can see someone complain about it. Oh, and I made one bad joke, now I know how to fix it, but I can’t. It still bothers me.3) Maybe my writing is a bit bland. In addition, I need to adjust cultivation levels of several characters and some numbers (kilometers, population).
4) I made each chapter end with a cliffhanger! Joke. Well, not a joke. But I think it would be characters and well-planned plot with a lot of foreshadowing. I also like to make every battle matter. And no fillers, I have so much to write about without them.
5) 50-60, I’m sorry that someone has to read it in the current state. If I had a chance, I would like to spend 3-4 more days editing my work.
To be honest, right now I just hope that there were only two other people who send their novels besides me.