Hey everyone it would be much appreciated if you could check out my new novel which is still in its beginning stages. I'd like some genuine feedback on what I've written so far. Here's the link
http://wbnv.in/a/29hCsFN
Whannmarie

- Oct 1, 2022
- Joined Mar 7, 2021
- In My new novel
Anyone up for a review swap? I am sort of new to writing so I only put out the first three chapters but I would love to hear opinions on the story.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/dark-embrace-trilogy-book-1--new-beginnings_20972193605428105Anyone up for a review swap?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005The_Mad_Titan Hello you had already reviewed the start of my book and I reviewed yours. I have two more chapters out and was hoping you could give your opinon on them
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005Review swap anyone? https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005
mozza_mello Hey I have a new chapter up. I was hoping you could read it and give me an opinion on it and I reviewed your book btw and I absolutely love it
mozza_mello I would like to swap here is my book
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005anyone up for a review swap ?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005ESF I reviewed your book so please review mine
ESF I reviewed your book so please review mine
LordSputnik ok thank you for taking a look. By the way I had other people read it and they all seemed to like the switching POV, so I just went with it
LordSputnik hello you seem to review books really well and i hope that you would review mine. I am a new writer, this is my first story ever so i would like a very honest opinion on the two chapters I have uploaded
This is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005ESF I'll be reading yours now
The_Mad_Titan thank you ill begin reading it now
Whannmarie Also i apologize as i do not yet have a proper cover .
Daoist31U82v 2 minutes ago
Hello everyone im interested in receiving a review of my first chapter. you see I am a new writer and this is my first book so i would like to know if it appeals to you
https://www.webnovel.com/book/aristia_19504114705494005
Title: Aristia
Synposis: People only know of what their creators have exposed them to. What will happen when a princess finds herself in an encounter that causes her to question her entire existence?...... She had been raised by her father, the King to believe that she was a mere mortal. As a result of this the existence of Angels, Demons and Hybrids were kept secret from her just as it was kept from mortals. Almost everything she had ever known turned out to be lies. When she finally learns the truth will she rise above the challenges that befall her or crumble when the going gets tough?