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Yo lookin for a proofreader! I know I might not get any but fuck It! Here's my discord/email so you we can talk In private. Either one Is good.
-X2 ジュース#4436
-x2juicex@gmail.com

https://www.webnovel.com/book/world-break-shattered-reality_22895630905760105

I say from the beginning my format isn't the strongest. But I have been given feedback and applied it to later parts. A lot of my work has only been read aloud and edited by me. So there are some mistakes (I would say a few but that would be a lie...) Thanks for the time to check me out! Peace!

I would like some feedback on my story. Anything helps, don't hold back any punches!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/world-break-shattered-reality_22895630905760105

Some key things
-the story is based on a game format
-I take inspiration from a lot of manga and anime for the story section
-Game-wise it will be a more in-depth ninja storm/demon slayer
-I've included character data on most of the main story characters
-I like to do spin-offs with side characters, especially If they play an important role in the main plot

You can leave feedback/opinions in the comments wherever I'll be on. Thanks!