https://www.webnovel.com/book/12488602106604405/All-Powerful-System
i would appreciate it if you guy s could check out my story. Feedbacks like criticisms are welcomed as long as it can help me improve.
Y0ur5_Truly
- Feb 28, 2019
- Joined Dec 16, 2018
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12488602106604405/All-Powerful-System
i would appreciate it if you guy s could check out my story. Feedbacks like criticisms are welcomed as long as it can help me improve.
So I began to write this book and I would like some advice on it. Although it is an Eastern fantasy type of novel with cultivation and a system that helps our MC triumph others and ascend to supremacy(As in being the strongest and not like White power or that kind of supremacy).
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12488602106604405/All-Powerful-System