The above story was a tricky one to review since it was an anthology of short stories. So if you @blairehawthorne have any further questions on what I said, let me know. For the sake of trying to not go over the 4k character limit for reviews, I was more general than specific in my points.
For instance, (SPOILER ALERT for anyone reading the story!) I thought about discussing the mention/usage of sexual assault upon John's death as one of the ways utilized to instill horror, but I didn't think it was a particularly helpful comment in comparison to the other things I said which assessed your writing on an overall level/view. Only if you want more specifics (ofc if you're okay enough with what the review said, that's fine too!), I don't mind answering~