cola_addict, from my point of view it's a great piece of writing! You have done great work. The story catches from the very beginning, and your writing style is very interesting. Keep up good work. I can suggest using different online tools to check your writings for some errors it may contain. Recently, I have discovered https://robotdon.com/ - a very useful and helpful grammar checker which is pretty similar to Grammarly but from my point have more pros. Use it if you want to be sure that your writings don't contain any errors.
carlhodge
- Jan 3, 2019
- Joined Dec 27, 2018
Hi! I'm having the same question. I was looking for the map on the Internet but couldn't find. Hope, someone here can help.
Great, thanks! I think I will buy some books today.