firekid

  • Apr 21, 2019
  • Joined Dec 10, 2017
  • Hello, this is my entry for the contest, male lead :

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12199800105072405

    You can find below the synopsis :

    ""George was enjoying the breeze at the deck of a ship, on a day which seemed like every other.

    That was until everything froze around him.

    The sun seemingly exploded sending fragments that looked like meteors everywhere on Earth.

    System initiated. The trial for inhabitants of the world#3533 is starting. Please wait...

    Ding! Quest received!

    Survive for 30 days.

    Then everything started moving again, introducing him into a new Earth where monsters existed and humanity had to struggle for survival.""

    Any comments welcome, thank you

  • Hey guys,

    thanks for the comments and reviews so far. The positivity about my novel is an extreme help for me while writing. I never thought I would be so happy about a strangers encouragement and good criticism. ​I hope you will keep enjoying my story.

    For all the new guys in the forum you can find my novel in the link below :

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/11362483406339605/The-Monkey-God

    I started it for the competition #5: Evolved Beasts in Another World.

    As always any comments for improvements are welcome.

    • Hey guys.

      Just wanted to let you know I am extremely happy and thankful for the positive feedback I received for my story. Since it is my first time writing anything, it means a lot to me.

      I had a friend drew a cover photo for me and released the 6th chapter.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/11362483406339605/The-Monkey-God

      Please keep letting me know of any comments and feedback you have to improve my writing so you can enjoy the story as much as I do while writing it.

      Thank you once again!

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