I will go through everyone's books, I promise.
I'm back in school, so RIP me even more.
Drop your links in my discord, too if you like
https://discord.gg/D3BR8qE
minyol
- Jan 7, 2019
- Joined Dec 30, 2018
I was surprised to see all the power stones disappear when I refreshed my novel. In inkstone, the stats showed only dashes. Is this normal?
Xiaoyiyi8 your MC's emotions were so raw that I felt like crying
Main con: Definitely have your grammar checked. The english is already there, but not quite.
Addtl thing: The world was described quite nicely. I hope more time is given to this because the talent is there. You should show it in words.
Left an official review on your book.
Great job! :)I am still going through everyone's work! Keeping my promise while trying to procure a 4th chappie huhu this is so hard
@WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Hello! I hope you notice my title :) I entered the contest just last night.
Author: Minyol
Title: Mr. System, I Love You
Genre: Magical Realism, Fantasy, Cultivation, Romance
Novel link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
Synopsis:In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.
Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.
Hi! So I'm a new author here at WN but I've already been writing in many platforms like Watt pad and the like. I'm always fond of leaving reviews and helping out fellow authors to encourage them to write more. I think it's important to be guided by the opinions of readers, and so I am offering to give reviews for free!
Just drop the following info. If the format is not followed, I will not open the link nor look for your book.
Author:
Title:
Genre:
Novel link:
Synopsis:I promise to read and review the first three chapters of your book. Of course, I will add your book to my Library and will continue reading it if I like it.
Although not required, it is much appreciated if you check mine out also.
Author: Minyol
Title: Mr. System, I love you
Genre: Magical realism, Fantasy, Cultivation, Romance
Novel link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
Synopsis:
In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.
I look forward to some great works!
- Edited
I advise against finding motivation to write elsewhere. New authors should write for the benefit of experience, and not gain. Re-writing chapters and scrapping many of them is a waste, in my opinion, simply because there are great opportunities to improve by hearing out critiques from fellow peers here in WN.
Please check out my entry to the Phenomenal Author Evolution FL contest :) I would deeply appreciate any comment I receive.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.
Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.
Hello! I'm humbly requesting a cover from you. I am not in a hurry :) Thank you for your service to the WN community
Title: Mr. System, I love you
Author Name/Pen Name: Minyol
Link to Story: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
Genres of Story: Magical realism, fantasy, cultivation, medieval
Any Specific Requests: I hope you can find a short-haired lead who wields a sword :) and I'd also like to request a beautiful transparent man who has his eyes closed (He's the system)
Me too! And I stopped receiving stones after 2 successful invites :(
