Hi. good morning
I hv read ur first chapter..it's good..but errors in punctuation marks...u can go through it .to make it more clear about where the ML is thinking and where the reality so happening.
shiriva
- Aug 13, 2023
- Joined Oct 25, 2019
ATOMIC_MOON hey I can't reach ur link...i asks me to re sign in...any other way u can use
No I m not writing anything....I ll see wht i can do with urs
ATOMIC_MOON
Hi...I can help you with basic grammar mistakes as I said in my post...help the reading experience more comfortableI love to read new content but recently there are lots of novel that hv common errors like "he /she"..so the reading experience becomes worse...pls authors try to not do it and if any author wants some help in proof reading and editing help... contact me