LilyStarsMoonTears The best advice would be to just write what you would like to read by yourself.
My Opinion on some original novels
LilyStarsMoonTears The best advice would be to just write what you would like to read by yourself.
l_ovecraft Awesome review
LilyStarsMoonTears All I think about is hitting my 1500 word target. Do whatever it takes to hit it.
Myumara LOL. I mean, I do keep going till at least 800 words cause I know editing will bump it up to probably 1,200. GarpDMon is correct. I just write what I enjoy.
I base my story arcs off of tabletop RPGing, so I just think about what story I would have enjoyed playing. I don't like the whole stats shown in writing though. I prefer it to be a gradual growth.
Can't say much about hooks and what not. I haven't been roasted yet, so have no idea if I did a decent job.
Anyway, I hope we get to see more of @l_ovecraft's reviews!
Hey @l_ovecraft , sorry if im bothering you, but would you mind posting your review of my book on the novel please? I think it would really help people contemplating whether to jump in or not to make a decision....the rating doesnt matter, the info does! Thank you! And thanks again for the roast, I find myself constantly analyzing my writing and striving to get better. Its all thanx to you!
Yeah I also wanted to do that. Sorry I didn’t till now
Myumara That's some great advice ;3 the only problem is that it turns out too cheesy XD
@all Ok so I found a novel I am reading atm (The Hunger from Alma Katsu). So I wanted to inform you that this thread is On Hold for the time I am reading the novel. I am sorry, but I just wanted to talk about it so you guys don’t think I dropped the thread.
l_ovecraft I would love to get an opinion harsh or not I think that is how someone can grow but I ask that you read all the chapters. https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005/Hinder-Rella but if I had to pick one chapter 64.
Scarlettbunny Hey can you check my new work and tell me what you think.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11529754806409805/Adopted-Soldier
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11551006606418505/31007670290927228
Writing Prompts Contests #10
Pls i need errors to keep improving.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11499287105408005/Fallen-Emperor-Game-System
This is my longer work
lynerparel definitely!
Scarlettbunny thanks
lynerparel done left my comments on chapter 3 and 7. I read them a couple of times. It would flow so much better if you had better grammar but it is such a cute story 
Scarlettbunny Thanks would double check it again and try to update it once the writing prompt contest is done.
Scarlettbunny What parts do you think I could change at the moment?
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Honestly just they way you describe the situations it could easily be expanded and be more descriptive. The one part in your last chapter. "Surprised she got angry at him " could easily be turned into 'she surprised herself by feeling nothing but anger towards him. He dared to repeat his actions from the first moment they met." But that's just my opinion. Honestly my husband accidentally hit my head with the back door of the car and I've been out of it that I didn't realize it was master!
Scarlettbunny I see I guess your write, I was kinda rushing in writing chapters that I didn't bother expanding the feelings to a better description. I just wanted more chapters before the writing prompt ends, I'll make a better chapter once, the contest is over.