I have a story which I'd initially written for the RTW fanfiction contest. Rather than discontinue, I decided to continue on with the story.
I'd like an honest review on my story. Be blunt and tell it like it is. If it sucks, tell me it sucks. If there is room for improvement on certain parts, tell it like it is.
I just want to know so I can become better at what I'm doing.
Thank you.
_Chanyeol_ that link not work
I saw the title before the link failed. Burn The Witch. Is that it? So it's a RTW fan fiction?
SweetsTomato It worked for me: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10808677306174105/Burn-The-Witch/ took me here.;,;.
_Chanyeol_ I'll review your's (#9 in my queue) can you do the same with mine?
LetThereBeMagic That was what I had written it for, but I'm making changes
DeJeL Sure.
_Chanyeol_ this has nothing to do with your thread, but ugh, I love your username.
yaoyueyi thanks :)
Google for a blessing
_Chanyeol_ exactly. he has to be the most talented person to step foot on the world LOL
yaoyueyi His rap and voice tone in Stay With Me is really great.
MasterRabbink tbh I prefer king of the krump, the chansing machine better
