Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

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      Review Swap, anyone?

      Hi, I'm InkSage
      So, there's a fantasy themed novel I'm presently writing, it's titled Cultivating Eternal Divinity
      It's actually good, if you ask me, but I'll leave that for you to decide.

      Synopsis
      Cultivation is a thorny path, where uncertainty and countless trials reign, with most reaching their end at the machinations of Heaven's will. In this grand journey, many falter before grasping the true essence of power, falling victim to the inevitability of fate's tricks.

      In a seemingly insignificant corner of a minor world, Kong Xiang embarks on his unique cultivation journey. Amidst the myriad Dao pathways, he grapples with the trials and tribulations, snatching his fate from the heavens and leaving his destiny in his hands alone. Will he be able to forge his own path in the unpredictable world of cultivation, amidst ever-present uncertainties and challenges?

      "Let the heavens tremble and the world stand in opposition! I'll forge my path with unwavering determination and the might of my spirit.

      Here's the link;👇👇👇

      https://m.webnovel.com/book/cultivating-eternal-divinity_22081567106445305

      Please tell me when you've reviewed mine, so I can do the same for yours.
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