ProPug Done... If you are interested in fantasy novels please check out mine as well. I need some feedback. thank you.

    Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
    It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
    If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
    You can read my novel here:
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

    Please read it and let me know what you think.
    Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

      panpan_wuv sure I’ll get around to it tomorrow thanks for the comments, I posted the finale to the arc if you wanna check it out, probably my best chapter in the past 20 or so chapters. Very violent,

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