Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

    This is my first novel.

    synopsis:

    "The first memory that overwhelmed my mind as I woke up in this unfamiliar form was the horrifying image of my own father decapitating me,” reminisced Garrick Stormwind, the Archduke of Astrea. Brutally murdered by his own family, he inexplicably finds himself imprisoned in an unknown body, shackled within the confines of a dungeon, consumed by an intense desire for revenge. Join him on his unwavering journey for justice and understanding as we delve into the captivating story of The Revived Archduke's Revenge.

    Thank you for your time and support.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-revived-archduke's-revenge_27763328308994605

      Hi, I'm open to review swaps, but I need some honest feedback, preferably in paragraph or chapter comments. I know that my novel is lacking, but I can't pinpoint what the problem is (I'm sure it has a lot of issues, but bear with me). If anyone has the time, please help me. Thank you.🙏🙏😁

      You can read my novel here:
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

      Please read it and let me know what you think.
      Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

        watcher567 I already read the 3 first chapters and I must say that it was very good and captivating. I added into my library, so I can tune with your updates. Also thank you for the review and your feedback. I'll do my best to fix the issues you mentioned.

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              It's a Male Fantasy Lead. It's set in the 21th century and it has mythological elements a bit of romance. So, if it kinda sounds like your thing especially reading the synopsis then go ahead give it a read. It only has 2 chapters right now but I think it's good and that matters, so read it and see if you the same thoughts as me.

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                Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
                It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
                If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
                You can read my novel here:
                https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

                Please read it and let me know what you think.
                Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

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