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ok let's swap
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11721807806489805

If anyone is willing to post in my topic, I'd be more than happy to review their work.

I'm re-writing a novel and have asked for advice here.

Snitzfoam well, if you're gonna see these depending on the length, you might not like mine.

As a warning, I'll tell it to you now — eleven chapters of my novel is 63k words, so yeah...

daoist_om
Soooooo... weve got a predicament on our hands... I read on mobile, and reading on mobile can be a bit buggy for me, and due to this bugginess, I can’t read about half your chapter, possibly most.

what do you mean? It works fine for me on mobile, maybe refresh it and see if it works

Gyihhuhu_ oookay i’ll Read like the first chapter and that should tell me quite a bit.
My 8 chapters are only like 4000 words...

daoist_om I have no clue dude, I’m truely sorry, but I am no tech wiz and do not know how to fix this

Afternoone i read the first 3 chapters. it’s a very interesting story and I Find the characters intriguing, the system should make its motives clear however, perhaps not yet, but at some point you should know WHY dan needs to become a god

daoist_om sounds good

Gyihhuhu_ sama your work is very long, as thanks for supporting me early on. So I will be posting the detailed review tomorrow because you deserve so much more. Thanks!

daoist_om Aw thanks dude. I really like yours, I've posted a review for you, read it.

I...it actually sounds pretty bad(the review I gave to you mean) but I didn't mean anything bad though. I really like what you're doing. Because if I don't point out your mistakes, you'll never learn will you?

Snitzfoam
Hello. This is my novel. I'd love to hear what you think about it. I'll leave a review on your page too, of course.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/11704404706480705

ImBloo link ain’t workin, could you just tell me the name of the novel?

Snitzfoam
The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure

ImBloo oh you have got to be kidding me... part of the chapter is blocked off by my buggy iPad and I can’t read it, i’ll Test later to see if it works then.

Snitzfoam You sound like you have a really shitty phone.

Gyihhuhu_ you commented on like chapter 8 of within a dungeons grasp I think? Yeah I don’t post in the auxiliary volume because I can’t check the chapters I post there. Again, buggy iPad