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Afternoone i read the first 3 chapters. it’s a very interesting story and I Find the characters intriguing, the system should make its motives clear however, perhaps not yet, but at some point you should know WHY dan needs to become a god

Snitzfoam Ok! then see if it works sometime later if it still doesn't work then ignore.

daoist_om sounds good

Gyihhuhu_ sama your work is very long, as thanks for supporting me early on. So I will be posting the detailed review tomorrow because you deserve so much more. Thanks!

daoist_om Aw thanks dude. I really like yours, I've posted a review for you, read it.

I...it actually sounds pretty bad(the review I gave to you mean) but I didn't mean anything bad though. I really like what you're doing. Because if I don't point out your mistakes, you'll never learn will you?

Snitzfoam
Hello. This is my novel. I'd love to hear what you think about it. I'll leave a review on your page too, of course.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/11704404706480705

ImBloo link ain’t workin, could you just tell me the name of the novel?

Snitzfoam
The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure

ImBloo oh you have got to be kidding me... part of the chapter is blocked off by my buggy iPad and I can’t read it, i’ll Test later to see if it works then.

Snitzfoam You sound like you have a really shitty phone.