Navakor It's well done, and I've finished my review. I liked the story but the concept of being a vet was... unusual. I think it's a great idea, I can't think of anything to critique about it.
Please comment on this to let me know that you thought of my story.

      Okika252 I'll get to it later, I have an event with boy scouts tonight, so I'll get to it ASAP. In the mean time if it's not too much to ask would you review mine? (On scouts honor I'll get it done for you when i can.)

          Jessie OK, i reviewed your novel, please review mine when you have the time, thanks!

              Lex_George I would suggest you dont use the dynamic link, as they are unable to be reviewed. just a tip, ill be done reading in a sec since its just 3 chapters
              EDIT: OK you need to split up your paragraphs more.

                  Dark_Reality I finished your review! sorry I wasn't able to read as much as i normally do for a review, but the style isn't one of those i'm particularly fond of... HOWEVER! you are doing a great job.

                      Okika252 IM SO SORRY! i forgot to do your review! let me do it real quick!
                      EDIT: the reviews done

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