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EldridSmith It's not a problem we all have our own likes I will read and post the review soon.

Link to the novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11500790706397805
Name: Slayer
Short synopsis: The main character wakes up in a new world and starts to explore it however while on the journey he crosses path with his friend turned enemy who was the person that killed him in his old world but this person is much stronger than MC in this new world even though when they both died they had the same level of power.
The story is about MC exploring the mysteries of this new world and how the person who killed him made it into this world and why he is stronger than him. Also about how he himself came to this world.
To get a better understanding I suggest going to the novel's page and reading that synopsis.

Thanks in advance.

Here is my novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11500790706397805
Short Synopsis: The main character wakes up in a new world and starts to explore it however while on the journey he crosses path with his friend turned enemy who was the person that killed him in his old world but this person is much stronger than MC in this new world even though when they both died they had the same level of power.
The story is about MC exploring the mysteries of this new world and how the person who killed him made it into this world and why he is stronger than him and also about how he himself came to this world.
To get a better understanding, I suggest going to the novel's page and reading that synopsis.

silentscarlettt Thank you for the revision but It still is not what I had in mind so I'll be using the first image you sent since I can't ask for another revision.
Sorry for making you do a revision and not using the image.
Thanks for the work you did on both covers.

Skully_ The mc was an expert but right now he is not, he is a normal human being. I also don't intend to make him a master from the beginning I believe going from weak to strong is much better for mc as a person and to the story.

One of my main objectives with this story was to create a good villain and not a person who is evil for the sake of being evil which in this case is Cao who like you said revolves around the mc. I wanted to create a villain that has a personality, motivation, and goal but I guess I was unable to present that but I can guarantee as the story moves forward all these things will become more clear.

I considered my writing to be good but I believe I needed this as now I won't think 'My writing is good since I know it's good so others will also think it's good' I will also try to reduce the amount of info dump and dialogue is a big part of what I'm trying to improve.

I will keep your examples and tips in mind and improve my writing.

Thank you for pointing out the good and the bad so I can create a better story and maybe one day mine will be up there with yours ;).