BabyTanuki comments can hurt

Check Idle System. RR readers had eagle eyes.

This is why this Rabbink can't post there yet. Must practice more. Must reach Andur level first.

    BabyTanuki If your novel is romance orientated and popular with a female reader there are very few on RR like that.

    If its fantasy, sci-fi with weak to strong MC with strong female lead. There are plenty of novels like that on RR and more than one in the top rating novels.

      Rorsharch You can check out my new novel, Death: A Shadow of Darkness. It's Xuanhuan/Xianxia/Eastern Fantasy and has no transmigration/reincarnation.
      Gods are the major part of the story, they are not typical gods of Xuanhuan/Xianxia and posses cool avatar ability.

      You may try it.

          BabyTanuki would you have discord....? Wonder if you're ok if I asked some questions about your experiences writing successfully so far... and whether the numbers I have warrant me continuing my current book...

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              I have one but never use it. Don't really play much videogames anymore which is the only thing I'd use it for. Never play multiplayer anymore so even less reason to use it lol.

                  Such mysterious creatures. Ummmmm, what should I do? SYCHE, I WAS NEVER THINKING ALL ALONG! GO POKEBALL!

                    Skully_ In other words, you are calling everyone here at webnovel an uncivilized, barbaric critic only capable of the bare basic critique. My word good sir, never have I been so judged before acquaintance before!

                    -wobbles off into the sunset with my top hat and monocle-

                        Rextraos I think we lost sight of what this thread was about.
                        -follows closely behind wearing a dapper bow tie and drawn on thick black eyebrows-

                          Take_the_Moon thank you :) title is courtesy of the Rabbink itself @MasterRabbink
                          If you find the first chapters bad or confusing, hope you could share your feelings so I can learn and update...

                              Rorsharch MasterRabbink

                              Have to agree with this. System novels are harder to write as the author needs to also create a system. This is why some of the Pro-Authors on this site are "inspired" to use the Dungeons and Dragons systems, so they don't need to make a whole new system on their own.

                              Also, shameless plug of my own non-system novel, The Demon's Clockwork Heart . It's actually a complete short story.

                                    LawCol
                                    I personally regret adding a system in my 1st novel. The readers are very hard to please when a system is added. There's one crowd that hates OP systems, but likes small help systems. Another likes OP systems and hates small help systems. The third crowd just hates systems!

                                        SnoozySloth well I on the other hand did pretty well with my first system novel. I don't know why but no one really cared about the system that much. My readers were debating if the mc was op or not.

                                            I love the system, not surprising at all.
                                            The system is like an old grandfather or a memory of past life useful! The difference is that we can evolve the system throughout history and make it important or not to each chapter, unlike the god's theme, the old Taoist grandpa (which is usually a spirit) or the memory of past life.

                                            I write 6 story and at least 3 have system, the other is a divine item that has several Taoist grandpas, one is a story about the organization of Taoist grandpa and another is a young Taoist grandpa.

                                            I like to write systems, they are really fun, you can create a system with poisonous language, a very protective system or a system that evolves into something cute.

                                            Dude, I can not write a simple story with just a cultivation system!
                                            I even find it absurd when the MC leaves the family and goes out for cultivation for 500 years!

                                            If I were the romantic pair of a cultivator or best friend of a cultivator:

                                            Me: 500 years? My Good friend until one day!
                                            #partiu adventure in another world!
                                            Cultivator: Are not you going to wait for me?
                                            Me: Are you crazy? 500 years? I have more things to do!
                                            Cultivator: But this is normal!
                                            Me: Normal my ass! If a friend of mine stops talking to me for a year, I renegotiate the intimate friendship, for a normal friendship!
                                            Cultivator: This is unfair, after all I have to concentrate to find out the meaning of this cultivation technique!
                                            Me: 500 years? Dude, give up being an immortal cultivator, you are a very insane dump! Goku did not even take 50 years to conquer the gods of the universe, you take 500 years to understand a technique ?! Fuck you, do not look for me anymore, I'll already be dominating another planet! (ù.ú)

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