Alright folks let's play a game. The rules are simple: every post has to have only one sentence (don't make more than one) and the sentences must be connected story-wise . For example:

Poster 1: The sky is yellow in the far away planet.

Poster 2: The sky is yellow in the far away planet. So yellow that you would think you're in an apocalyptic area.

Poster 3: The sky is yellow in the far away planet. So yellow that you would think you're in an apocalyptic area. In that world you couldn't find any beings

(you copy the story before and add your sentence)

I'll start.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils , who were mischievous.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils , who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragons throne.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils , who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragons throne, but a dragon is after all a dragon ,and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half dragon half human being whose mind soul is tormented with revenge.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils, who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragon's throne, but a dragon is, after all, a dragon, and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half dragon half human being whose mind soul is tormented with revenge.

In a small village at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was there he was born, an abomination hated by his own brethren just because he had blood red eyes, the eyes which only the descendants of the Black Dragons who sided with the Demons during the last war have.

Fathered by some unknown, his mother left the village many years ago and only returned on that dark night, in labour and more than half dead.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils, who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragon's throne, but a dragon is, after all, a dragon, and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half dragon half human being whose mind soul is tormented with revenge.

In a small village at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was there he was born, an abomination hated by his own brethren just because he had blood red eyes, the eyes which only the descendants of the Black Dragons who sided with the Demons during the last war have.

Fathered by some unknown, his mother left the village many years ago and only returned on that dark night, in labour and more than half dead.

After being born from the ugly half dead beggar looking woman, the villages wet nurse took one look at the infants eyes and slowly began to strangle his frail neck with her callous ridden hands.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils, who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragon's throne, but a dragon is, after all, a dragon, and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half dragon half human being whose mind soul is tormented with revenge.

In a small village at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was there he was born, an abomination hated by his own brethren just because he had blood red eyes, the eyes which only the descendants of the Black Dragons who sided with the Demons during the last war have.

Fathered by some unknown, his mother left the village many years ago and only returned on that dark night, in labour and more than half dead.

After being born from the ugly, half dead beggar looking woman, the village's wet nurse took one look at the infant's eyes and slowly began to strangle his frail neck with her callous ridden hands. The child's blood red eyes shot open, in response to the cold touch, and peered into wet nurse's own cold eyes, piercing her mind, causing her to let go of the baby's throat and clutch her own head.

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom. The cunning little devils, who were mischievous. The loli only race of succubi stole the dragon's throne, but a dragon is, after all, a dragon, and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half dragon half human being whose mind soul is tormented with revenge.

In a small village at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was there he was born, an abomination hated by his own brethren just because he had blood red eyes, the eyes which only the descendants of the Black Dragons who sided with the Demons during the last war have.

Fathered by some unknown, his mother left the village many years ago and only returned on that dark night, in labour and more than half dead.

After being born from the ugly, half dead beggar looking woman, the village's wet nurse took one look at the infant's eyes and slowly began to strangle his frail neck with her callous ridden hands. The child's blood red eyes shot open, in response to the cold touch, and peered into wet nurse's own cold eyes, piercing her mind, causing her to let go of the baby's throat and clutch her own head.

The village chief who happens to be in the room as well notices the power held within the eyes, being a transmigrator from Earth, the village chief remembered the nostalgic Sharingan thus deciding to spare this child's life by using his unique cheat [Deceive all Creation] which can put a temporary guise on any living being.

Questions:

The cunning Demon race deceived the dragons, who yearned for wisdom.(Who yearns for wisdom? The Demon race or the dragons? The cunning little devils, who were mischievous (Yes? What did the cunning little devils, who were mischievious, do?). The loli-only race of succubi stole the dragon's throne, but a dragon is, after all, a dragon, and here we spread ink on the bloody journey of a half-dragon half-human being whose mind and(?)soul is tormented with revenge.

Original:
In a small village at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was there he was born, an abomination hated by his own brethren just because he had blood red eyes, the eyes which only the descendants of the Black Dragons who sided with the Demons during the last war have.

Propose:
In a small village, at the edge of the Mulan empire, it was here he was born: an abomination hated by his own brethren for his blood-red eyes, eyes that only descendants of the Black Dragons—who sided with with the Demons during the last war—had.

Fathered by some unknown, his mother left the village many years ago and only returned on that dark night, in labour and more than half dead.

Edits: Hyphenating the adjectives.
After being born from the ugly, half-dead beggar-looking woman, the village's wet nurse took one look at the infant's eyes and slowly began to strangle his frail neck with her callous-ridden hands. The child's blood-red eyes shot open, in response to the cold touch, and peered into wet nurse's own cold eyes, piercing her mind, causing her to let go of the baby's throat and clutch her own head.

The village chief who happens to be in the room as well notices the power held within the eyes, Period break needed here, I’d think being Being a transmigrator from Earth, the village chief remembered the nostalgic Sharingan thus deciding to spare this child's life by using his unique cheat [Deceive all Creation] which can put a temporary guise on any living being.

Chapter 1: blue whale village

A young and average looking farmer youth with an aura of nature lives on a remote island in the in the East Blue that grows whale fruits.

A young and average looking farmer youth with an aura of nature lives on a remote island in the in the East Blue that grows whale fruits. He had black shoulder-length hair and a slender body, his looks were plain but his eyes were filled with confidence.

A young and average looking farmer youth with an aura of nature lives on a remote island in the in the East Blue that grows whale fruits. He had black shoulder-length hair and a slender body, his looks were plain but his eyes were filled with confidence.

His name is Obito, Obito Mist, name given by his father the village chief; being an otaku in his previous life he decided this name based on the red eyes of 'sharingan' and the main character of the novel he like. But, never did he know that obito himself had transmigrated from the naruto world after self destruction of tail beast which tore apart the foundation of soul world, where dead lived.

A young and average looking farmer youth with an aura of nature lives on a remote island in the in the East Blue that grows whale fruits. He had black shoulder-length hair and a slender body, his looks were plain but his eyes were filled with confidence.

His name is Obito, Obito Mist, the name given by his father the village chief; being an otaku in his previous life he decided this name based on the red eyes of 'sharingan' and the main character of the novel he likes. But, never did he know that Obito himself had transmigrated from the Naruto world after the self-destruction of the tail beast which tore apart the foundation of soul world, where dead lived.
After Obito was born, the village chief has changed a lot. Wearing a modified conical hat with white cloth sewn on it, he issued a command ordering all villagers to start addressing him as the 'Hokage.' He even wanted to change the name of the village to 'The hidden leaf village,' but later abandoned it as the elders opposed it by saying their village does not have many leaves and it is not hidden.

In the coner of the room there was a shadow with a evil smile. This guy is waiting for the village chief'son get alone for robbery the eyes of the child, so that he can return to the wuxian world and continued transdence the immortality and then open the gate of forza dimension.

A young and average looking farmer youth with an aura of nature lives on a remote island in the in the East Blue that grows whale fruits. He had black shoulder-length hair and a slender body, his looks were plain but his eyes were filled with confidence.

His name is Obito, Obito Mist, the name given by his father the village chief; being an otaku in his previous life he decided this name based on the red eyes of 'sharingan' and the main character of the novel he likes. But, never did he know that Obito himself had transmigrated from the Naruto world after the self-destruction of the tail beast which tore apart the foundation of soul world, where dead lived.
After Obito was born, the village chief has changed a lot. Wearing a modified conical hat with white cloth sewn on it, he issued a command ordering all villagers to start addressing him as the 'Hokage.' He even wanted to change the name of the village to 'The hidden leaf village,' but later abandoned it as the elders opposed it by saying their village does not have many leaves and it is not hidden.

In the corner of the room, there was a shadow with a evil smile. This guy is waiting for the village chief' son be alone to rob the eyes of the child so that he can return to the Wuxian world and continued transcendence the immortality and then open the gate of Forza dimension. Little did he know, someone else also watching him from behind, lurking in the shadow with a slight red glint in the eye.
'How dare you think about snatching the sharingan I have set my eyes on' the person behind snorted. He himself is a transmigrate and he wants to make use of the village chief's son's sharigan to form his own Mangekyo Sharingan.