SnoozySloth
you misread my words (or am I being unclear?)
Say a character shows up for 2 chap and disappears for a few dozen chaps. When we see him again, readers will already have forgotten what he looks like anyway. So I only describe him in detail when he shows up again.
Writing Prompts Contests #26 & #27
ImBloo
Ah, my bad. Sorry, I'm a bit tired/exhausted lol. I've been slacking on sleep to learn JavaScript and PHP for college. I hate web programming >.>
SinisterSmile
I presented a rewritten version where I corrected the English grammar mistakes. I did not repost your existing version. Note: Your novel was already in English when I read it and I did not use a translator. Your original novel had a lot of run-on sentences and read a bit like someone speaking broken English. I assumed you originally wrote it in English as your 2nd language? Or did you write it in Portuguese? If the latter then that explains our confusion. I've never heard of this website auto-translating novels from Portuguese to English though?
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Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
New chapter is out: The Arrogant Young master
SnoozySloth whoah! Rising fast!
Strange. 5k views, 4 chaps but 143 powerstones... Lol. Maybe a big group of friends...
Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
Chapter 9 is up
A pain in the ass (Part 1/2)
It's a side quest.
It's a side quest?
It's a side quest!
Also next part will be out in 25 minutes. No point dragging out the side quest. Stay tuned!!!
How much cliché.
Please read my story entry for #27 and give me reviews.
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Blackvision
Hmm are you talking about my novel?
I'd say in the first 3 chapters or so, the cliche concentration is about 0.12 mc per word, a bit higher than average.
In later chapters, though, it will drop to a level of a bout 0.02 - 0.03 mc per word, way, way lower than average.
All in all, I'd say my novel has an acceptable level of cliche concentration and is safe for human consumption.
See for yourself here
SnoozySloth Hey I noticed your amazing review of the other webnovels in the contest and was wondering if you could review mine as well. I'm a rookie writer with this being my first time writing a novel of this sort and would appreciate any tips and advice I can get!
The third chapter of my first webnovel The Mage of the Millennium is out!
Please check it out as I really appreciate any views and comments on my work.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105/32333203515694012/The-Mage-of-the-Millennium/Gift
We're getting some character development through to bridge to juicy action coming soon. I promised a dark tale and a dark tale you'll get. It'll be arriving soon in the next few chapters!
Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
Teaser for Chapter 11 is up
The heartfelt gratitude
Totally safe for work :)
Chapter 11 is up.
A heartfelt gratitude
A bit of galge here.
Pls comment, review and vote :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12050576006828905/Bewitching-Eyes
i am just here to get a review
I guess this is my entry for the prompt (though it's not much yet). I appreciate any possible feedback.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12045244806819705/Curiosity-Killed-the-Cat
Hi! Here's my entry for the prompt Legendary Mage!
Any comments and reviews are much appreciated!
Title: Spirit Mages
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12031468906790005
Genres: female protagonist, slow romance, action, romantic subplot, hiding true abilities
Synopsis: Magic wasn't limited to just wielding the elements and training yourself to be the best mage. Here in this world, a person may be born with a Spirit, which are literal spirits that latches itself onto your soul, be it an animal or a plant, and inherently becomes one with you.
But you need immense luck to catch the fancy of a Spirit. Not everyone has the chance to be a Spirit Mage.
Now, knowing that, she wasn't sure if she had immense good luck, or immense bad luck.
Assassins had ambushed her family in the late hours of the day.
Together with her brother, they somehow escaped death and had ended up thousands of miles away from their home.
Thinking that they finally escaped such misfortune, they bathed in relief. Only to realise where they had ended up.
Not only did they fall right before a high school, they ended up right before a renowned high school that trained Spirit Mages: St. Snowdrop High School. And they had fallen in the middle of school assembly! Right on the stage!
Hello guys! This is my entry for Writing prompt 27. Hope you will enjoy. The biggest plot twist it about to happen
The S in Sclera
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12020404506767705/32359732975042105
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@SnoozySloth @WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL I would like to report the novel Death Incarnate and user TheOldFogey for author voting with 36 accounts to abuse the competition.
I monitor my ranking in the competition - here's the stats yesterday.
#1 Desolate Mage (mine) ~250 stones slowly increasing through the day
#2 Death Incarnate (TheOldFogey) - 149 stones until suddenly in 30 minutes it jumps to 233 stones instantly with 37 users voting all in the same window of time
36 accounts created around the same months, with their past 5-6 months only activity ever being on TheOldFogey's 2 novels for the past 6 months!
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12016679805766705/Death-Incarnate
Hello guys I have also written an story about God's and Human for this contest so I would like your review over my story.
It's name is God and Human.