I have decided to put out a novel I had in the works so please enjoy!

Dark Witch: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12028799106784805

Synopsis: After her death Seraph is thrown into the Kainen plane. She looses hope in all things good and turns to utter evil. As a practitioner of the dark arts Seraph sells her own soul for a chance at revenge, power, salvation. Join her as she gains unimaginable yet blasphemous powers from the underworld plane. As becomes one of the most infamous and prolific figures in the universe.

I made my first webnovel because I really love the idea of The Legendary Mage. I've always been into fantasy novels and even wanted to write one. This is the perfect opportunity I needed. If you guys could check it out, I'd really appreciate it a lot! I only wrote one chapter so far, but I'll continue working hard on it. Thank you!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12022477505776105

The Mage of the Millennium
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Synopsis:
Pithar his whole life has been a failure. His father is the Archmage ruling over the magic kingdom and his siblings all geniuses. The disgrace to the family is condemned to be a forbidden necromancer in the Magi Trial and ordered to be executed by his own father. Set free by his doting older sister he must weave his way around a world unfamiliar to him. He must discover the hidden facets of magic and learn to use the strongest yet most vulnerable part of him, his emotions. Follow Pithar's journey as he explores a world unfamiliar to him and discovers the art of treachery, betrayal, and agony. All he has left is hope.

    ImBloo

    Thanks for the review mate! I appreciate the advice a lot. Your writing overall is quite good, but I'd suggest to change the cover a little bit. It seems a little unprofessional. Other than that great job!

        DarkTempest
        Man's gotta have priorities. I've barely got time to write. A new cover can wait.
        BTW, if you've got time, pls drop a review on my page. It'll be nice. Thanks :)

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/12023947106773305/Bloodline-Mage
            Synopsis: A moment of Pure Despair and Fury awakened his bloodline. A Bloodline that was genuinely terrifying and its holder a Mage that would Ruthlessly dominate every single realm in existence. Follow Adrianus Von Frazier on his Journey of Blood and Fire.

            Can someone please check out my story and tell me their viewpoints on it. Just posted the first chapter and I need some positive or constructive feedback.

            ImBloo
            Reviewed. Sorry it isn't a particularly interesting review. Gaming/virtual reality is my most disliked genre in general, so I have a very hard time getting interested in a story about it. Copy of my review pasted below.

            Disclaimer: 5 stars given despite whatever I write below. Review is as of 3 chapters read. Also, I don't like gaming/virtual reality novels. I can never get invested in them. Not even the top and best of the genre. So, I'll be leaving that bias out of my review. This leaves my review a bit bland since it only examines the technical aspects of the story.

            Writing Quality: 5/5. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes. I wasn't paying super close attention, so there may be minor ones I missed. Or maybe he really had none. Either way, the author has great writing.
            Updates: 5/5 as of this review. Novel is a few days old with 7 chapters.
            Story Development: 4/5. MC is betrayed. We get to watch as he plots his revenge. Written well. Minus a point for lack of originality by using a super common cliche within the genre. I don't deduct points for most cliche, but I don't even read this genre and know the cliche for MC gamer to get betrayed, then X happens, then he starts planning his revenge and comeback.
            Character Design: 4/5. Good emotional descriptions for MC. Minus a point for lack of describing character looks for MC and other characters.
            World Background: 5/5. Great opening with the battle, mages, warlocks, dragons, etc. It will probably pull you right into the story if your into gaming novels.

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