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Kazi223
I will be honest there is no way I could read all 18 chapters and give you a comprehensive review right now. However, I perused it and have a few suggestions that can help build your reader base. Before I begin with the advice I will say, your writing is good, you know how to make your characters believable. You have some grasp on how to move readers. From what little I could see, plot seems to be fine.

PROBLEMS
1.) Your cover is basic and doesn't resonate with the vibe of your novel. I suggest using https://spark.adobe.com/make/book-cover-maker or https://www.canva.com/create/book-covers/ and make a new one.

2.) Your synopsis is generic and not very interesting. The synopsis is GREATLY important for drawing in new readers and is most likely where you are losing a lot of readers. It follows the same trope as every other reincarnation/system novel. People are tired of the same novels with different names. Identify what about your novel is unique and put that in the synopsis.

3.) If you haven't used all ten tags for your novel, DO IT. It is more exposure and ways for readers to find you. Again, that will only help if you have a good cover and synopsis.

4.) Engage whatever readers you have. Try to respond to them as often as you can. Other readers will see that and like you,

5.) Leave "Author Notes" that engage with your readers. Ask for reviews, power stones, comments. You can even use it to let them know about how your life is going so they come to know you.

6.) Publish chapters at a steady rate. 7 Chapters a week / 1 per day is optimal. If you can't do this that is fine. Just keep your readers updated on what releases you can do.

With your writing skills there is no reason you shouldn't be ranked higher and have a steady reader base. If you need some examples or just want to check it out, my novel is at https://www.webnovel.com/book/10685728705112005/The-Archaic-System