Considering that the two non-author reviews on your book are from accounts that were made today, have only commented on your story, and have the exact same weird problem that you do with putting spaces before punctuation, not after them, it sure looks like you just made two new accounts to add fake reviews to your book.

As far as actual criticism, your punctuation and sentence structure is terrible. I strongly suggest running your chapters through the free version of ProWritingAid, which will catch many of your errors.

Your story synopsis is extremely generic and nothing interesting happens in the first few chapters, but a lot of people on here enjoy generic reincarnation stories so that might not be an issue for you.

    hey thanks man,apppreciate it I recently added more chapters which might interest you ,and I will be using pro writing aid I need a viewer to guide me through it ,I wish you could have reviewed it there ,one account was made by me the rest reviews have no part of me involved.if you can spare some time to read the next 2 or 3 chapters and critic me again It will be helpful

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