FrozenSynapses Nice :) I'm also a great believer in how much Grammarly makes a difference. I'd just add, never exceed three periods (...) -- I think that's called an ellipsis. And note that there should be a space after it.

    FrozenSynapses wow, amazing, it feels a lot better, I'll just replace this version with the one I uploaded, thanks a lot for your help and insight ( I still have yet to incorporate the changes pointed out by the others, blame my speed 😅😅)

      4 months later

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      Thanks.

        a year later

        No review swaps/self promotion outside of monthly thread, and do not necro threads, Morophus

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