BerriApplepi Youโ€™ve made a great novel. just never grow complacent and constantly try to improve yourself even if you become the best. Much love to your novel and I excitedly wait for future updates.

I have no advice since you are much better than me at writing, good luck and have fun โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

    UnjustlyUnderpaid Thank you! I will do my best to improve and not stop hahaha and I still think you're better than me in writing, I like how you write your story ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I'm currently in chapter six hahahah I love how long your chapters are, I don't even realize it since I just keep on reading it ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      SinB Your novel is written professionally with a great attention to details. I couldn't find any faults since I was completely immersed in your story. All the best for your future endeavors

      SinB Don't forget to find a suitable cover. Since you already have a cliche title, your view count will rise exponentially so find a good cover soon.

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