@Pgimz Review done! Very nice romance! Hot! I would only point one flaw. As other people had said to you on some comments, I advise you to revise the earlier chapter to tweak the pov changes. Try to add a sentence or two to smooth the transitions.

@shrishthi @fantasy_land added to my queue i will read and review your the day after tomorrow :D

    Hello everyone, I want to tell you guys about something, for the last couples of weeks I was thinking of making changes in my books or even delete them. But some of you guys who reviewed the books gave me more energy to keep going. (I don't wanna sound dramatic :D) anyways I decided to create a new path for both books and it will end up being in the same series. I will post the new links later today.
    I'll start reading your books later this week and I'm very excited for all novels here and I wish everyone enjoy writing and reading each other great books :)

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