Book_Keeper
Title: Destiny Forged
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13142328105838605/Destiny-Forged
Novel Assessments & Reviews: Empowering Writers & Helping Readers
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Notice:
I don't read books as a "normal reader."
Thus, there is no need to provide synopses or any other information except a story link.
Even if I would like to, I don't continue reading books that I've already assessed.
You may wish to review swap or self-promote however you'd like in this thread as I don't mind. But just know that it is not to be asked of me.
Please don't double post the same story though. Giving out reasons why you think your story is great is acceptable, but I doubt this is the best thread to do so.
As I've paused the review queue, I'm only doing assessments. You can use the results to figure out where your story may be lacking. The "About" and "Writing Guide" can help you with this, too. And of course, reading others' stories is highly recommended.
Book_Keeper thank you for your time Sir
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Nzoputa Assessment done: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/webnovel-assessments-37/
Review Done @Kayalicia (formerly Tan_Liliu)
https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/review-siren-song-kayalicia/
Up Next: Momocatt
Important Note: Since the Library Overhaul, the assessment expectations have technically become more lenient/forgiving as originality used to be heavily considered in PD and CF. Perhaps due to the commonality of story themes and character roles, this used to make acquiring a 3 in PD or CF more difficult. So, from this point forward, don't consider "Excellent" novels to be perfect. Although this shouldn't be considered even before the overhaul, it's even more so now. Novels can be constantly improved and refined.
Book_Keeper OMG! Thank you so much for taking your time to assess my novel! That was so fast! I'm happy for the current score and I hope I can improve myself in the future
Once again, thank you for doing this! <3
Book_Keeper So, you once said a novel comes into its right first after a while. Hence I'm checking if your reassessment after at least another 15 chapters is still valid?
You ran mine at chapter 30 something. I just broke 100, which was the milestone I set up when you asked the last time (a couple of months ago).
If so:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
Book_Keeper thx for the good review. Appreciate it!
Book_Keeper Hello, I'm here once again. Thx you very much for the review you gave last time. It helps me so much for knowing it. Could you review my newest novel? I know it has only 4 chs or 5, but yeah... I just want to know... :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12971758306249405/35934737855990568
A review if you don't mind
The CEO's Office Boy is a Girl
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13378653305608305
A cliché reincarnation in modern time with the FL being a super talented woman betrayed by best friend, cheated by Fiancé, broken family but end up being spoiled rotten by overbearing cold tycoon CEO and an angelic but two-faced second male lead CEO as she execute her revenge, is a really popular chinese drama nowadays.
A lot of girls fawned over this kind of drama and Tan Hua, a talented young fashion designer is also not an exception.
But...is it still exciting if you one day found out that somehow you have transmigrated into this kind of chinese drama not as the FL or the villainess but as a nameless pitiful cannon fodder, a lowly office boy who is actually a girl?!
That is what Tan Hua, a 22 years old super rich daughter of a famous fashion designer parents ended up in.
From an extremely rich and pampered life into a poor family with no father no mother, a mentally ill older sister and a dead identical twin brother, Tan Hua had to live her new life in disguise as a boy!
The worst part is that the second male lead-sama who looks like an angel outside but ruthless inside, the one who fawn over the FL...is going to kill her the moment she just transmigrated in???!!!!
Watch as Tan Hua survived from the black-bellied second male lead-sama scheme being only a normal office boy with no money no power at all, slowly rising to be a world-wide famous fashion designer!
But...could someone tell her just why the hell that evil pretend-to-be-angel second male lead-sama who was courting the FL before.. is now pestering her???
Release schedule 1 chp/day (800-900 words per chp) until get into top 100 as this is a side project. Check my main project: "The Dragon Prince's Wife is a Translator"
Daily Mini Chapter series will start after this novel get 10 reviews
If u don't like to read imperfect grammar then this novel might not be your cup of tea so please be prepared.
Tags:
female MC, cannon fodder, transmigration, office boy, gender bender, slow romance, office romance, romance comedy, fashion world, rich to poor, cold-blooded love interest, black bellied love interest, sadistic love interest
It's been a while since the last time you checked out my novel so I thought it was time to have you give it a second look
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13140936805834705
Book_Keeper thank you for the review, sorry for the late reply I've been trying to move out of my parents place. Once all of this is done I'll be able to start writing again
Hello everyone. I'm still alive. :)
I had some family and personal issues come up recently including a death in the family. Unfortunately, I also had a relapse of the previous cold due to overwork. With that said, I'll be reorganizing my schedule in the next week to get back to the website since it seems I missed out on some changes around here.
As reiteration, the review queue is closed to new requests. I'm back to reviewing those on the list around once a week give or take. Any stories posted here are up for assessment (or reassessment for some).
I'm also amazed by the amount of consistent website traffic during my absence. I guess the Story Posts were a hit. Thank you to all, and have a good weekend. See you soon.
Thanks in advance:
Currently 113 chapters (ongoing)
Here's the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834892806612005/Transcending-the-Martial-Peak
Thanks in advance. I wish for improvement.
Currently 113 chapters (ongoing)
Here's the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834892806612005/Transcending-the-Martial-Peak
Have fun.
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Hello again. I'm just nonchalantly dropping my second novel here~ Would accept criticisms as always
Do you accept novels in a language other than English ? If you have the possibility to understand. And the another question is, did you need a certain number of chapters beforehand ? Book_Keeper
hi bookkeeper. i know your busy but could you make out time to review my new boo?
it called
STEALING THE EMPEROR'S HEART.
please tell me where my faults lay as i need help.
The novel is called Eternal Sin, common "transmigration" story.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13738330605046505/Eternal-Sin
You can do this whenever you have the time, or just not do it at all. Please give me the HARSHEST review possible, I want to improve my writing; and I can't do that with nice reviews.
Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
Title: Discovering evil
Genre: fantasy
Synopsis:
"Cecelia the night in coming and we don't have time. This boy is about to wake up and when he does we must make sure that he is on our side. Do you want to be the reason this world is plunged into eternal darkness?" Saying this the woman grabbed Bren and placed her forefinger on his forehead. A warm, mellow glow shone from his head and a faint mark appeared.
"You say he's not ready but he's a strong one. Cecelia we must train him and you know it. There is no better protection for him than himself." Aunt Cecelia was wavering but eventually gave in.
"Bren things are about to get a little weird okay. You and I have powers. There are lots of people with powers but yours is a bit stronger than everyone else. Danger's coming so we're gonna have to send you away so you can learn to protect yourself from danger."
Magic is real.
There's a whole world of it.
Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...
On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.
I'm a new writer so I hope that you can check out my novel and comment or rate it.