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90751052 Read up to chapter 10, would've read more but I have irl plans, had to tear myself away... (I decided to post it here instead of a review on the novel's page since it looks like you already have a lot)
Stars: A solid 5/5 (not biased)
First of all, it's unique in a new way. Taking reincarnation to new level. The beginning chapters leave a lot of room for interpretation. At first I was a bit skeptical because of the "exploded along with eleven girls" but I'm really glad I picked this up! The spacing helps read faster and the pacing of the story is pretty quick in the beginning but those are only minor things... (tortured for three years, yeah, no big deal) ahem
Love the characters! Especially Layla, not sure why though but she's my favorite so far. (please don't let anything happen to her because I was reading some of the reviews and it said "I didn't start reading this to feel the feels". Ma heart is weak...)
Their interactions are funny too. Sacred of spiders despite being a spider. That's like saying oxygen kills ppl (no, no it does not).
Anyways, this story is a solid gem. I would recommend it to any reader in general and anyone who loves reincarnation but wants something different from the now meta (usual) reincarnate as a goblin, weak monster, super strong monster, etc. It's refreshing and smooth.
Yuyumamoru no problem I think haha I havent made the rules yet, so for now I will count it.
Anyone else should try to post it on the site from now on though.
Hyowha
Title: The Way of the Sword
Genre: West Fantasy and BL.
Author: Take_the_Moon
Synopsis (This is a backstage synopsis!): Zemin Yan is a poor orphan boy who is too weak to live alone in this cruel world of a martial cultivator, where there are different and powerful races like the Devils and Beasts.
He and his friend Yi Yuga try to test for the great Celestial Sword sect, "miraculously" he passed and entered the sect, but his talent was classified as medium and would not achieve much.
However, Zemin Yan did not give up and continued in the sect struggling until one day he was given a very important mission, he and two other colleagues, chosen by a great master, would have to become servants of the prodigal more pride of heaven.
This prodigy is called Zhong Liang, and he is cold and indifferent, a sword practitioner whose dao emphasizes the emptiness of feeling during the battle. However, for some mysterious reason, this genius has his crop affected and is going to the demonic way, his teacher worried and without finding a concrete logical solution, he thinks that his disciple needs to develop more emotions or bonds that keep his mind with sanity, so he recruits three more charismatic weak disciples who could arouse the feelings of Zhong Liang.
Of the three servants, only Zemin Yan remains and humbly continues his services, but one stormy night made Zhong Liang do something very shameless and Zemin Yan's tofu was taken that way!
Zemian Yan does not know what his senior brother, Zhong Liang, was thinking when he ate his tofu without warning!
Yuyumamoru youve been featured
@Yuyumamoru Much appreciated! I'll take a look at your work now friend. :smile:
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Yuyumamoru Left a review on your work! It has potential, keep it up!
Hyowha Review done :smile:
Title: Dominic
Genre: Fantasy, Supernatural, Romance
Author: me!
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13011773506401705/Dominic
Synopsis: ''Shut up!'' I said with pure madness while I was feeling my blood boiling inside my veins. Also I was thankful for the rain which was covering my back. After all, I was sure they could not follow me now. I was smiling. ''Do not smile now, it is not the time.'' he said. But I knew this was the time I could laugh. ''Don't be scared. They cannot even see you. Mr.Ghost.'' I said while he was looking pretty upset.
I reviewed @Yuyumamoru 's novel :3
Hinder-Rella's is a spin off of Cinderella. Prologue, actual story and finish. So yes it is completed. My second book, My Way To You is out not finished. I have taken a darker more fantasy approach but it starts off as a 12 year old girl who is sold to a brothel but decides to change her world. It's darker, some people could not stomach the violence in Hinder-Rella and this is more gore detailed.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11241536305310005/Hinder-Rella
And
Title: Broken Caged Heart
Genre: Romance Fiction
Author: mvphoenix (me haha)
Synopsis: Greed , Money, and Power. Is this all that matters? Why does the world revolve around them? Why is it that they are important to everyone? If this is what the world has come to I want to be excluded.
This world is filthy. Is it worth living in such a place?
I am so stupid to think that I could live cleanly in such a world. I'm so unlucky.
The darkness has touched me.
Can I still hope for love?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13041938605448705/Broken-Caged-Heart
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Title: Endless Vertex
Genre: Fantasy
Author: bacon_bacon
Synopsis:
Same old earth. Civilians living an absolutely normal life, except for the fact that there are Warriors who commoners don’t know about.
This is a novel about a teenage Warrior’s rough adventures to discover life’s true purpose, as well as fascinating things that might actually exist in reality. Who knows? Your 80 year old neighbor could be a Warrior who can smash boulders and do the impossible.
There is no limit to what people can achieve.
So yeah. That’s basically it.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13189662305003005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305047673
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Hi I'm new in this platform and saw the writing prompt 60 so I decided to try and join.
Title: Riel, my evil master.
Genre: Magical realism, Romance
Synopsis:
It’s the start of summer break and Mina is busy searching for a part time job. How she ended up looking for work instead of enjoying the beach with her friends? Well, her MacBook fell from the third floor window and landed straight to the ground and her parents won’t buy her another one. MacBook is her life as a literary student.
She got lucky when she landed a job as an assistant in a tech company and MacBook Air was given as a signing bonus!
But what would you do if you found out that you just signed a contract with a devil, would you consider yourself lucky?
Mina was too busy staring at Riel full of sinful thoughts to consider the consequences.
This is a story about Mina who falls in love with her evil master as they begin their adventure in hunting down demons.
Thank you! :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13239793506226205/Riel%2C-my-evil-master
Hyowha I left a comment on ur book! How does the magic work? Also, ur book was already in my library! I liked it that much.
bacon_bacon done
Any type of constructive criticism would be helpful. This noob writer would be thankful if you drop by...Thank you!
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The World Can Go to Hell For All I Care
Synopsis-
I have one straight goal. To join the army, go into battle, earn money and glory.
Oh! Wait! I ain’t some patriotic soldier to lay down my lives for the sake of the country, no that shit is for people with some loose screw.
I just want the money so I could feed my little brother and sister, their world is only what I want to protect.
Also, I want glory so I could overwrite and clean the name of my father who tarnished the family name. We became a laughing joke in the country and even mom abandoned us. No, I don’t know if he betrayed the country or not, I don’t care. But I don’t want my little kid brother and sister to face the same mockery and hatred of the people as I did.
Just to protect the smiles of the only family I have, I would do anything.
But life knows to shit on you when things were just getting good.
Title: The Saga of A Mage Family
Genre : fantasy, military, politic, wars, management, magic, royalti
Author : WedhusSlayer
Synopsis : Tyas is a product of joint experiments between earth science and Iocyania magical technology. Previously, Tyas was just a monkey lab. Now that the evolution has been complete in a lab scale, Tyas has a physical body that is not much different from the magical girl in the city of Mage, except for her tail, which traces her origins. Because of this, she was allowed to roam in Iocyania, the planetary home of the mage.
Prof. Jack adopted Tyas as his daughter, along with other abandoned children they found. He was teaching them mathematics, science, Earth modern pop culture, MMA and even Earth superstition.
While the Magus, Meyrlion Titan appointed Tyas and her foster sibling to be his primary students. Teach them all the top-notch mage sciences in Iocyania.
Without Tyas and her family realizing, the era in Iocyania would undergo a drastic change. War on the national struggle, hunting of natural resources and magefuel and global warming will be the toughest challenges for them to survive in Iocyania.
Without them knowing it, a large hole had appeared in the Iocyania atmosphere, due to the use of forbidden magic sigils.
And the fire of the challenge was slowly targeting their residence in Mount Luwa, and the cities of the mages: Magetan and Magelang City.
I'ill work my review on the book tomorrow